I Love/Hate Him

I Love/Hate Him

2K Reads 31 Votes 7 Part Story
shahidah By shashaonrocks95 Updated Mar 16, 2012

Shasha felt happy with her new found friendship with Lucas.  Even if  there was an agenda behind it. Soon, feelings start to bloom in Shasha only to be crushed by the fact that Lucas was merely using her. Years later, when Shasha finally got into a univeristy, fate brought her to... Lucas as they are forced to go  through university together... Will Shasha get her long awaited revenge? Or will past feelings rekindle within her?

VenessaJinson VenessaJinson May 24, 2011
There were a few word that needed to be capitalized....
                              But aside from that, this was a really good story! 
                              *voted*
tierney1984 tierney1984 May 24, 2011
this is a great start! i love that rihanna/ne-yo song, too!! =) keep up the great work! *voted
Retr0spect Retr0spect Mar 06, 2011
udate soon! i like it the goth dude seemed awsome lol and are Shasha and Haikal going to have all the same classes cuz that would be awkward lol
Tigerchick Tigerchick Mar 05, 2011
lol after 3 tries im finally able to read it :)
                              lol lost on the first day...yea thats something i would do
                              love it  POST SOON!!!!
                              
                              whoot whoot first vote!!!
Tigerchick Tigerchick Feb 23, 2011
Love it so far :)
                              I want to know know wat really happened between them. There has to be more to the story, there has to. :) haha it's weird how they go to the university and are lab partners.... Who knew? :)
                              Upload soon!!! 
tianajade tianajade Feb 23, 2011
A good beginning. I like some of your descriptions, although it could use more and more emotion. A few grammar errors, but nothing to turn a reader off your story. So far it sounds like an interesting storyline, and your characters names are different (: Good work, and keep writing!