Author: MidnightKoala
Reviewer: _zaintassu_
Chapters reviewed: The entire novel
First impressions:
Cover wise:
The background is good. It's isn't exactly eye-catching but is satisfactory.
An important part of the cover is the tagline. It caught my eye immediately so that's good. The title doesn't give me a push to read the book.
Blurb wise:
The next thing that attracts a reader is the blurb. Your blurb is too short and too dull. It didn't give me an idea about the book. Honestly, your contains only nine simple lines and half of them are questions.
Writing style:
I believe every writer has a different style. You have interesting ideas but they don't exactly reflect through your writing.
You must work on making a reader interested. When I read the book I felt that if I skip two or three paragraphs I would understand the book. That shouldn't happen.
The way you describe the situation is interesting. Sometimes we should let the reader imagine too.
Plot:
The plot is very interesting and luring. The plot twists and the environment of the plot is commendable.
I really liked the way the story unfolds. A new discovery as the story goes on. The flow of the plot is remarkable.
Character development:
The way a character understands herself or himself along the way is character development. And I was really impressed. We realize the motives of the characters as the story unfolds.
You have let Neoma grow through the chapters. The way she understands her real position in this world is amazing.
Grammar and typos:
I checked multiple times to get hold of one proper mistake in your grammar and typos. I couldn't find any.
Your vocabulary is good too. Not much to complain about in this topic.
Final impressions:
I am very happy with the plot and since I read the whole book I am happy with the ending too. Not very happy with the last line though.
I hope my observations have been useful and that it helps you improve your writing.
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