Doudil40: Unexpected Love

By Saku321

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✵Chapters✵ [✓: Done / ✗: Not Done/In Progress] Chapter 1 ~ ✓ Chapter 2 ~ ✓ Chapter 3 ~ ✓ Chapter 4 ~ ✓ Chapte... More

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7 [Christmas Special]
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10 [Valentine's Special]
NEW STORIES!
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Maybe Do Parts Of Brittney.. HELP!
Might be busy D:
Brittney's New Life [Chap.1]
Brittney's New Life [Chap.2]
Brittney's New Life [Chap.3]
Chapter 13
THANK YOU :D
Brittney's New Life [Chap.4]
EXTRA 1 [1/2]: Sakuya's New Dad
EXTRA 1 [2/2]: Sakuya's New Dad
Liking My Story?
QUESTION TIME!
Update? And QUESTION TIME! 2
Chapter 14
Chapter 15 [1/3]
Chapter 15 [2/3]
Chapter 15 [3/3]
Chapter 16
QUESTION TIME! 3
EXTRA 2 [1/2]: #SSUNKIPZ
EXTRA 2 [2/2]: #SSUNKIPZ
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
A Little Update? and Questions for YOU!
QUESTION TIME! 4 & Questions for YOU! 2
My Private Moments/Secrets/Facts [REVEALED]
Chapter 19 [1/2]
Chapter 19 [2/2]
QUESTION TIME! 5 & Questions for YOU! 3
Chapter 20 [Halloween Special!]
Lox Family Member List [For EXTRA 4]
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
EXTRA 3 [1/3]: Jose and Sakuya's Date..
EXTRA 3 [2/3]: Jose and Sakuya's Date..
EXTRA 3 [3/3]: Jose and Sakuya's Date..
Author N./Update & QUESTIONS FOR YOU! 4
Chapter 23 [1/2]
Chapter 23 [2/2]
Info & Ask Anyone!
EXTRA 4 [1/3]: Lox Family Visit?
EXTRA 4 [2/3]: Lox Family Visit?
EXTRA 4 [3/3]: Lox Family Visit?
Chapter 24 [DARE (1)]
Chapter 25 [DARE (2)]
UPDATE/Confession..?
Chapter 26 [1/2]
Chapter 26 [2/2]
Chapter 27 [1/2]
Chapter 27 [2/2]
Chapter 28 [1/3]
Chapter 28 [2/3]
Chapter 28 [3/3]
New Story For 50+ Followers! & Help? O^O
Chapter 29 [1/2]
Chapter 30 [1/2]
Chapter 30 [2/2]
A/N [Explaining]
Opinions?
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33 [1/2]
Chapter 33 [2/2]
EXTRA 5 [1/3]: Melon Bros, Melon Lovers
EXTRA 5 [2/3]: Melon Bros, Melon Lovers
EXTRA 5 [3/3]: Melon Bros, Melon Lovers
Chapter 34
Chapter 35 [1/4]
Chapter 35 [2/4]
Chapter 35 [3/4]
Chapter 35 [4/4]
A/N
10 to 1 Challenge

Chapter 29 [2/2]

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By Saku321

~Double's POV~

We hear a scream down in Sakuya's room.

Shocked, we burst into the room, but they weren't there.

Only Dreadlox's headphones and Sakuya's bracelet lay on the ground.

Of course, this bracelet, turn into someone. Must be Sakuya's Guardian.

"Whoa. That was dizzy. Wait a second." He looks around. "Where's Sakuya?"

"I don't know. We only heard a scream!"

"Well, shit. Let's get going then. Name's Nero by the way."

"Hi. Now let's get going!" He grabs Dreadlox's headphones.

He presses the button on it and a portal appears.

"Not sure if this is where they are, but all I heard it shows the last place Dreadlox went."

We jump in, but land somewhere in some weird.. World..

I try to stand up, but it felt weird.

I sit, but.. It's something.. I did not expect..

I look at my.. Erm.. Hooves..

"WHAT THE FUCK?!" I shake from the shock.

"Well.. We're.. Horses apparently." Nero cuts in.

"What are you talking about? You stallions and mare are ponies." We look up.

A light green pony with a horn. Her eyes were bright orange-yellow eyes.

"Uh.. Hi..?"

"Hi! You must be new! I'm Lyra Heartstrings! You?"

"I'm.. Double. That's Bodil, Brittney, Nero, and Jose."

"Well! Those are some very interesting names!"

I tried to stand up with four hooves.

Noticing, I have a horn, like Lyra.

Then, I look to the sides of me and see a blue slime on my plot.

"What's this..?"

"What do you mean? That's your cutie mark. Did you bump your head hard or something?"

"Oh. It's just that.. I'm supposed to be human." She then gasps.

Her pupils of her eyes strinks down a bit as she grabs me.

"OMG! YOU MUST TELL ME EVERYTHING ABOUT YOUR WORLD!" She's creeping me out..

Didn't know what to do, I somehow make my horn glow and all of us, not Lyra, teleports somewhere else.

We land infront of a big treehouse. Literally a house.

"What the?"

"I got no idea. Just. No. Idea."

We hid in the bushes as this pony with a horn comes out with a.. Baby dragon?

"Twilight. Is there something wrong?"

"Nothing. It's just that.. I felt some kind of weird teleportation energy somewhere."

"Alrighty then."

"Let's get back to sleep, Spike."

As so, this Spike and Twilight goes back inside.

We ran away real quick. We stop at a forest.

A storm cloud was on top of the forest.

A rainbow maned pony strikes it with her back hooves as she flies.

I did grab some of Lyra's books when she wasn't looking.

I grab one that were like a mini dictionary.

I read it and learned that Pegasus can fly and control clouds and weather.

But, we heard a scream after.

Alerted so suddenly, we run into the bushes near someone's cottage.

The rainbow maned pony flies away suddenly.

Then, some mare of pink flowing hair comes from a chicken stock farm.

Spotting the rainbow maned pony, she says something quietly a bit. "Rainbow Dash?"

I went for it, trying to do that teleport spell.

We end up in another bush, but one in the forest we saw.

A light shines within the darkness.

A unicorn illuminates the area with her horn.

We get some close up look of 2 other ponies.

Not what I was expecting.

I mean, most of the ponies I've seen is colorful.

That unicorn was dark. I'm not sure, but she might not be from this town or so..

"Oh, this is just perfect! That little upstart is going to ruin everything!"

The stallion with wings complained. Not sure what happened..

But it seemed really serious at one point.

"She won't tell; there's no way she can afford telling anyone about those pictures."

"Then why didn't she cooperate?!" He yells.

Noticing the mare tenses up a bit, she stays silent.

"Do you realize we're SUNK if she opens her mouth?!" I felt like this is a fight.

She's silent once again. The stallion just sighs.

"It could still work out.. I just have to beat her the old-fashioned way."

I wanted to pop out of the bush, but Bodil puts me down.

He puts his hoof over is mouth, indicating to be quiet and see how this turns out.

"That.. Sonic Rainboom thing was probably just over exaggerated, right?"

She seems to be not listening so much, more to be so, upset.

"Yeah.." Finally answering, but in an upseting tone.

As for the stallion, he was kept silent.

"What's with you? You've been like that since we got here."

"Like what?"

"All dodgy.. And you mope whenever we talk." His expression turns serious.

She looked away for a moment, but faces back.

"There was.. Actually something I wanted to tell you after this whole thing went through.."

"What is it?" He walks towards her.

She tenses up as I see it.

"I was.. Going to give you this..But perhaps it's better if I tell you."

"T-Tell me what..?"

She hesitated for a moment. "I can't help you do this anymore.."

His expression turns really.. Really bad..

".. What?"

"These scandals we're pulling, I think we've gone too far!"

"Too far?! Pfft! It's not like anypony is getting hurt!"

Ah.. I see how this is a fight now..

"No, we're exploiting vulnerabilities and weaknesses of innocent athletes just for our fame and fortune!"

"What exactly are you trying to say here, Sonata..?" Oh.. That's her name.

"Either you come clean and tell the truth about how you've been winning all this time, or I.. I quit.."

"Are you joking?! You can't quit! I can't do this without you!"

His eyes looked like it was gonna burn to death. He glares at her so deadly.

"Then.. Then you'll go down with me! If I'm caught you'll be caught too; you're just as guilty!"

Bodil shakes my shoulder.

"Enough of this.. We need to get out.." He whispers.

I nod and try to teleport.

Hopefully the two ponies didn't noticed the flash.

We land near the cottage. We just ran from behind.

Once we tired to run, we saw that stallion fly up.

He crashes down, as we heard.

A cloud strikes a stick in his mouth.

Not sure how that happened.

I fainted after a bit though.

I guess it was too much energy from the teleportation.

As I remember, Bodil carried me somewhere.

Sorry this took long! Anyways! Sorry for any mistakes! See ya! ^.^

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