Empire of Righteousness

By AmayaValery

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The Divine woman Draupadi was born as the eternal consort of Panadavas. But we always fail to treasure things... More

Characters (01)
Chapter 1 : The Beginning
Chapter 2 : Dyut Sabha
Chapter 3 : Truth Revealed
Chapter 4 : Upapandavas Journey
Chapter 5 : Pandavas Agony
Chapter 6 : Abhimanyu's Birth
Chapter 7: Prativindhya's Strategy
Chapter 8 : Eunuchs
Chapter 9 : Welcome to Devapath
Chapter 10 : Suthanu
Chapter 11 : Duryodhana's Letter
Chapter 12 : Draupadi's Secret
Chapter 13 : A Daughter's Love
Chapter 14 : Suthanu's Realization
Chapter 15 : Fathers Love
Chapter 16 : The Sick Brahmin
Chapter 17 : Love is about to Bloom
Chapter 18 : An Embarrassing Encounter
Chapter 19 : Draupadi's Nightmare
Chapter 20 : The Bond of Souls
Chapter 21 : Satanika's Doubt
Chapter 22 : A Mistake
Chapter 23 : Draupadi's Undying Love
Chapter 24 : Suthanu's Marriage
Chapter 25 : The Pain Only Increases
Chapter 26 : Brahmin's Identity
Chapter 27 : Wounds of Heart
Chapter 28 : Reconciliation
Chapter 29 : Yudhisthir's Realization
Chapter 30 : Melody
Chapter 31 : Draupadi's Thoughts
Chapter 32 : Uncertainty
Chapter 33 : Prativindhya's Dilemma
Chapter 34 : Marriage
Chapter 35 : Doubt
Chapter 36 : Panchakanya
Chapter 37: Unexpected Meet
Chapter 38 : The Second Proposal
Chapter 39 : A Permanent Damage
Chapter 40 : Two Marriages
Chapter 41: Family Reunion
Chapter 42 : Identity Revealed
Chapter 43 : Arjun Gets Cursed
Chapter 44 : Draupadi's Aid
Chapter 45 : A Woman's Enemy is a Woman Herself
Chapter 46 : The Lost Feelings
Chapter 47 : Law of Remarriage
Chapter 48 : Post Marriage Rituals
Chapter 49 : Kunti's Confession
Chapter 50 : Draupadi's Acceptance
Chapter 51 : The Medium
Chapter 52 : A Brother's Rage
Chapter 53 : Vanvas
Chapter 54 : Continues Tests
Chapter 55 : Dance Teacher
Chapter 56 : A Rainy Night
Chapter 57 : An Unexplainable Emptiness
Chapter 59 : A Love defying all Norms
Chapter 60 : Not Hurt Anymore
Chapter 61: Her Care
Chapter 62 : Krishnaa is Krishna's
Chapter 63 : Sweet Jealousy
Chapter 64 : Arrogance Kills Even Purest of Love
Chapter 65 : The One Year Long Term
Chapter 66 : The Grand Proposal
Chapter 67 : Her First Choice
Chapter 68 : Back to Them
Chapter 69 : Suryaputra Karn
Chapter 70 : Brothers Reunite
Chapter 71: A Mother's Tears
Chapter 72 : Answers
Chapter 73 : Defeating Magadha
A/N
Chapter 74 : One Woman Army
Chapter 75 : Her Celestial Form
Chapter 76 : Seven Bodies One Soul
Chapter 77 : Years Long Pain
A/N
Chapter 78 : Nature's Law
Chapter 79 : A Heavenly Problem
Chapter 80 : Self Blame
Chapter 81: Delicious Meal
Chapter 82 : Daanveer Karn
Chapter 83 : Eternal Fame
Chapter 84 : A Small Family Reunion
Chapter 85 : Dharmraj's Test
Chapter 86 : The Love of a Mother
Chapter 87 : The Future
Chapter 88 : The Plan of Abduction
Chapter 89 : The Warrior Princess
A/N
Chapter 90 : Vengeance
Chapter 91 : Lovers
Chapter 92 : Arrival of Next Generation
Chapter 93 : Her Best Friend
Chapter 94 : A Price to Pay
Chapter 95 : It's less Painful to Stay Away
Chapter 96 : Confession of one of the Most Unconditional Love
Chapter 97 : A New Problem
Chapter 98 : Past Surfaces Again
Chapter 99 : Only Death Awaits him
Chapter 100 : Identities
Chapter 101 : Punishment Served Properly
Chapter 102 : Vanvas Ends Here
Chapter 103 : Marriage Proposal
Chapter 104 : Barbarika
Chapter 105 : The Unfortunate Princess
Chapter 106 : Her Return to Devapath
Chapter 107 : Burn Together
Chapter 108 : Forgiveness is the Greatest Virtue
Chapter 109 : The Birth of Warriors
Chapter 110 : Undefeated Sword Master
Chapter 111 : Her Highness Samragni Draupadi
Chapter 112 : Evolving Relationships
Chapter 113 : Laws to Enforce
Chapter 114 : Same Fear
Chapter 115 : Devotee
Chapter 116 : No Regrets
Chapter 117 : Daughters
Chapter 118 : After Pregnancy Moods
Chapter 119 : Plan that Backfired
Chapter 120 : Conflict of Hearts
Chapter 121 : Hard Trainings
Chapter 122 : His Quiet Love
Chapter 123 : Upcoming War
Characters (02)
Chapter 124 : The Fear of Future
Chapter 125 : Star for the Moon
Chapter 126 : Opening their Hearts
Chapter 127 : Confession before War (01)
Chapter 128 : Confession before War (02)
Chapter 129 : Can the Past Resurface?
Chapter 130 : Division at the Worst Time
Chapter 131 : Awanti
Chapter 132 : Cruel Fate
Chapter 133 : Patal Lok
Chapter 134 : Sarvaga
Chapter 135 : Her Anger that Burns Bright
Chapter 136 : Satanika in Rescue
Chapter 137 : Rebel
Chapter 138 : Chaos
Chapter 139 : Mahakali
Chapter 140 : Unable to Accept
Chapter 141 : Proof of Chastity
Chapter 142 : Pity or Love?
Chapter 143 : Competition in Kakeya
Chapter 144 : Don't be like Her
Chapter 145 : Upcoming Conspiracy and Ongoing Wedding
Chapter 146 : The Rage Never Lessens
Chapter 147 : Free as a Bird
Chapter 148 : Satanika's Wedding
Chapter 149 : Through Her Eyes (Part 1)
Chapter 150 : A Completely Different World
Chapter 151 : Decree Against Bheemasen
Chapter 152 : Kheer with a Mix of Poison
Chapter 153 : Father x Sons
Chapter 154 : Through her eyes (part 2)
Chapter 155 : His Portrait
Chapter 156 : Pain that's Hard to Forget
Chapter 157 : Through Her Eyes (Part 3)
Chapter 158 : Accusation
Chapter 159 : The Dark Night
Chapter 160 : Deep Conspiracy
Chapter 161 : A Furious Krishna

Chapter 58 : The Right Time

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By AmayaValery


Vrishaketu's cries woke Draupadi up. She hurriedly went to his cradle.

"Putra, what happened?" she touches his chest.

Vrishaketu was afraid hearing the jackals and couldn't sleep. Draupadi picks him up.

"So, my brave son is scared. Let's go punish those jackals, okay? My lion son shouldn't be afraid of anything," Draupadi cooes at him.

Vrishaketu snuggles in her chest finding the warmth he desperately needed. His wailing turned into sniffles soon.

Draupadi exited the hut carefully so her husbands don't wake up. She looked back in the hut and Bheem has rolled on her side. Thank God she is up otherwise she would be under his huge body by now.

"So, Putra where are the jackals? See they are afraid now that you have come out," Draupadi talks in her baby voice.

Vrishaketu also looks around scared. What if those jackals come out? What if they attack his mother?

"See, they aren't here," Draupadi walks to beside the fountain which has become her favorite place.

Vrishaketu felt safe in her arms. No one can touch him. His mother will punish anyone who dares to harm him anyway.

"Waaa," he made sounds to make his mother look at him.

"Yes, Rajkumar. What has happened?" Draupadi kisses his small fists.

He giggles throwing his hand and legs up.

"Seems like you are in very playful mood. I am too. Let's play, okay?" Draupadi sits down and lays him on her thigh.

She covers Vrishnaketu's eyes, "Where is my Vrisha?"

Vrishaketu giggles as Draupadi removes her hand from his eyes.

"Here he is. And look how handsome he has become!" Draupadi cooes.

Vrishaketu bursts into giggles. Draupadi tickled his tummy by her nose.

"How energetic my son is! In a few years he will he taller than me. Then you can't lay on my lap anymore," Draupadi says.

Vrishaketu stops and looks at his Mata. Why won't he be able to lay on her lap?

He catches the thing close to him which was a fistful of his Mata's hair. He was hungry and began to chew on it.

"Ewww....don't eat my hair, Vrisha," Draupadi removes her hair from his mouth.

Vrishaketu couldn't speak. So he touched her chest and looked at her.

"You are hungry, Putra," Draupadi says.

Under the moonlight, Draupadi fed him as she sat down under the tree. Her minds going back to the times when her sons took birth. She herself didn't know much about pregnancy and children when Prativindhya was born. She was so nervous. Yudhisthir guided her lovingly. He was experienced because he took care of his brothers. He helped him take care of Prativindhya.

"Panchali," Sahadev calls from behind.

Draupadi immediately became self conscious. She wrapped the odhni around her chest. Fortunately Sahadev sat on the other side of the tree in her relief. He didn't even try to come near her.

Sahadev smiles. Her modesty is one of her best qualities that made him love her more everyday.

"I am sorry, Arya. Did I disturb your sleep?" Draupadi asks.

"I couldn't sleep. I was about to consol Vrishaketu when you took him out," Sahadev answers.

He didn't lie. He was following Draupadi. She was coaxing Vrishaketu so lovingly. Then she played with him. How mesmorizing the sight was! Maybe that's why children are the most befitting on their mothers lap. Sahadev wasn't around her when she gave birth. But he can tell his sons has received their mother's love immensely.

"Arya, I had a question for you," Draupadi says.

Sahadev immediately became alarmed.

"Ask me, priye," he says.

"Is it right to leave a child in fear of reputation? An infant?" Draupadi voice shook.

Sahadev always said he can't answer directly about the future. But if anyone asks the right question, he can answer.

"No, Panchali. It is Adharm," Sahadev answers.

"So, if someone wants to make up for the mistake and reveal the misdeed now, is it possible to go back as before?" Draupadi asks.

"It depends, Panchali. Some truths change everything. A lot of lives, trusts, relationships. Depends on how your present it. How others take it," Sahadev answers.

Draupadi sighs. All these years she has learned to read Sahadev more than anyone. She is familiar with his uneven breathing when something bad is going to happen, when a problem is about to arise, his eyes shone with desperation. His stiffen body posture. Right now, he is scared. Scared of the truth. How is everyone going to react to it and everything.

"It's late and Vrishaketu has slept. Let's go, Panchali," Sahadev stood up.

"Arya, will you accept it?" Draupadi asks.

Sahadev gently brushes his fingers on her cheeks, "I accepted it long ago, priye."




Karn watches in surprise. The huge training ground and Satanika is standing in the middle blindfolded. What is it going to do Karn thoughts. He isn't moving. It felt like he isn't even breathing. He stood there silently.

"Don't go in Tatshree," Shrutakarma whispers and holds his hand.

"What's he doing?" Karn whispers back.

"Bhrata is training. You will see soon," Shrutakarma goes and pulls down the rod.

From every direction thousands of arrows were launched by the automatic machine towards Satanika in tremendous speed. Karn gasps in surprise.

Satanika cuts down every arrow in inhuman speed. His hands were too fast for ordinary people to see. His eyes were blindfolded. He was following only the sound of the arrows cutting the air and his instincts.

Shrutkarma picks up his bow and takes six arrows all together. Karn watches in surprise. Even as a Maharathi he can do only three together. What is Shrutkarma doing? In his utter surprise, Shrutakarma launched his arrows towards Satanika.

All of his arrows hit their targeted mark.

"Karma, you cheated," Satanika yells.

Satanika wasn't ready for Shrutakarma's surprise attack. And definitely wasn't ready for six arrows. But Shrutakarma didn't intend to hit his brother so the arrows only surrounded his body and his sword fall off.

Satanika pulls off his blindfold.

"Bhrata, Maa always taught us unless your opponent has surrendered or dead, the fight isn't over," Shrutakarma smirks.

Satanika rolls his eyes.

"Unbelievable," Karn whispers.

"Pranipath Tatshree," Satanika touches his feets.

"Yasasshi Vaba, Putra. I am truly amazed with both of your skills. Satanika no man in Aryavarta is as great swordmaster as you. Shrutkarma you have overshadowed both your father and me, Putra. This is amazing," Karn enthusiastically hugged them both.

Karn doesn't know why but he feels like he is with his own family. They are his own blood. Maybe his bond with Draupadi is making him feel that. Whatever it is, it isn't a bad feeling at all.

"Tatshree, did you meet maa?" Shrutkarma asks eagerly.

"I did. She asked about you all. She misses you all," Karn says.

"How is maa living in a hut?" Satanika's voice was filled with sadness.

"Your fathers are making her life as much comfortable as they can. You don't have to worry," Karn assures.

"Wish they did it before. None of this would have happened," Satanika spoke.

"Fate is unchangeable, Satanika," Karn sighs.

Everything goes well, but the moment their fathers are mentioned, all the sons twist their face in disappointment, annoyance and anger.

"How are your preparations going?" Karn asks.

"Almost done, Tatshree. Still Mamashree told us to wait a bit more. And Shrutasena also said to delay it a bit. He was looking for the auspicious day for us to start our journey," Shurtkarma answers.

"Well done. Satanika, there's something that you need to know. Your brothers too. Come to my chamber after dinner," Karn says.

After dinner all the five sons and daughter in laws came to Karn's chamber.

"Kalyan ho, Putri," Karn blesses Siyaanshi and Maya as they touched his feet.

"Sit all of you. There's a matter to discuss," Karn says.

Karn asked Prativindhya to sit beside him.

"Putro, before anything I want you all to think calmly," Karn says.

"Whenever you say that, the matter is hardly a good one," Shrutakarma whispers.

Shrutasena only sat there annoyed. He knows very well what Karn is going to talk about.

"Putra Satanika, you have a.... marriage proposal..."

"Which foolish princess send it?" Sutasoma asks laughing.

"You wound me, bhrata," Satanika gasps in surprise placing his hand on his heart pretending to be hurt.

"Which kingdom, Tatshree?" Prativindhya asks not liking Karn's silence.

"From Hastinapur. Duryodhana's daughter Lakshmana's marriage proposal for Satanika," Karn says.

No one spoke for some time.

"I heard wrong, didn't I?" Satanika asks while flicking his ears.

"No," four of them chorused.

"Kakashree Duryodhana's only daughter Lakshmana?" Mata asks surprised as well.

"Wait a minute. Let me measure the audacity of that man first," Satanika growls.

"Sit quietly, Satanika," Prativindhya orders.

"Tatshree, does Maa know?" Sutasoma asks.

"Duryodhana will send the official proposal to her in some days. I am telling you beforehand," Karn says.

"Maa will reject it definitely," Satanika says.

"I don't think so," Karn says.

"What?" Shrutkarma asks in disbelief.

"Draupadi has thought about this very broadly. If Lakshmana marries you, she will be safe and away from society's pointing fingers. She will be safe under your mother's wings," Karn says.

"Maa agreed?" Satanika asked in shock.

"No, she said she wants to know both your and Lakshmana's answers," Karn says.

Everyone sighs in relief.

"This is so messed up, Tatshree. Look at our writsts. Lakshmana tied rakhi to all of us," Satanika shows his wrists.

"She did?" Karn asks surprised.

"Yes, she was here for Jyest and Bhrata Sutasoma's wedding," Shrutakarma answers.

"You realize that after she ties rakhi on you, there's on way this marriage can take place, right?" Karn says

"Exactly. Kakashree Duryodhana doesn't know it. Maybe that's why..." Prativindhya says.

"Yes, now wait for your maa to talk to you. She will handle it," Karn says.

"Oh God! My sister marrying me! Kaliyug is near," Satanika panicked.

"Calm down, bhrata. She knows better to not marry you," Shrutasena says.

Satanika looks at him offended, "Why would you say that? Women die for me. It would be any woman's dream to get married to me."

Karn shook his head. He felt like Nakul himself is sitting in front of him. People with their eyes closed will say he is Nakul's son. From his sitting posture to his walking everything is his father's carbon copy.








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