Title: Impossible
Author: adoremei-
Title: (5/5)
Cover: (5/5)
Description: (10/10)
Plot: (18/20)
Characters/Emotions: (18/20)
Writing Style: (13/15)
Grammar: (7/10)
Enjoyment: (4/5)
Total: (80/90)
Review:
I thought the title fit well with the story and it made sense. I think the cover was also aesthetically pleasing, and fit the story well too. Your description was also pretty good. I appreciate that you gave readers an idea of what the story was about, and it definitely made me interested in reading your book.
I actually really like the plot and characters, it's interesting. I think what you did with Y/n waking up as Jennie Kim and meeting Jungkook was interesting and you wrote the story well. I really liked Jungkook's character and Y/n's. At first, I didn't like her too much, but I like how she was working to change and improve her personality.
In the back of my head, I can't help but think about how is this all happening. Like in the beginning she was a failed idol who made bad actions. But then she wakes up fifteen again. Is she in an alternate reality? Is she in a coma? Is it possible that she can go back to her original world? I hope that this issue is addressed in the future of the story.
So your writing was pretty good, I was able to understand what was being said without too many problems. If anything, I would suggest cutting down on the spaces. You tend to leave unnecessary spaces between paragraphs and sentences, which makes things look messy. I also noticed that you tend to switch between tenses. This isn't a big problem, but it's definitely something I suggest going back and editing. If I were you I would just stick with the present tense.
I really enjoy reading Jungkook stories like these. I think the story is really good, and I plan to continue reading it. Thank you for letting me review your book, author-nim!
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