[Paalala lang po. Hindi po ako perpekto. Binabase ko po ang pagcritic ng mga stories niyo sa nalalaman ko at gusto ko lang maging honest sa inyo. Now, if hindi po kayo kontento, wala na po akong magagawa doon.]
TITLE: Fate of the Burning Fire
Written by: wallflowermiming
➡️The title is catchy and very interesting. Parang ang lalim ng meaning.
COVER:
➡️Thumbs up ako sa cover na gamit mo. It really screamed what the title is that made a very nice impact. Ang ganda ng pagkakagawa nito. And the blending of the fonts that use and the picture is totally awesome.
NARRATION:
➡️I like the way you narrate the story. It is clean and masusundan mo talaga ang flow nito. Especially the way you introduce some of the characters. The way you write it na hindi masyadong pa-spoil sa mga mambabasa.
TECHNICALITIES:
➡️ So far, konti lang ang napansin ko. Only some of the improper use of 'in' and 'on' and other words. I also notice some of your grammars pero kaunti lang talaga.
OVERVIEW:
➡️This story is great. Ibang-ibang din siya sa mga fantasy stories na nababasa ko. It reminds me of some of the anime series that I've watch.
Quote from Shee: “Sometimes, your real story just began the moment you decided to walk for an adventure.”
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