WARNING - Beyond this point is the stuff which I haven't yet edited to my satisfaction, ergo it may be slightly confusing in terms of plot and wording and the like.
The edits are changing the characterisation of all characters as well as adjusting the plot. The only reason I'm keeping the draft version up is because my edits will take a while to complete.
I dislike the draft version, I'll say that now, and I cringe at most comments on those chapters. I am well aware it needs improvement and I know what to do, as shown by my recent edits I hope.
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Red String {EDITING}
WerewolfWhy was her hair red? Simple... Because she dyed it in the blood of her enemies. *** One mistake. That was all it took. Then Lyra was gone - fleeing back to the place she'd been dreaming of ever since they took her... ever since they changed her int...
