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i wrote this story years ago and city of stars was a revision of a revision of a revision. the only thing i never included for the first revision was jessa becoming vivienne's best friend. i can tell you exactly what was going to happen to vivienne and fred: • so after the twins propose to vivienne the idea of her helping them, she obviously grows close to them and realizes they're not that bad • she begins acknowledging them in the hallways and even smiling at them during meals in the great hall • fred has grown a liking to teasing her, and often being quite flirtatious • vivienne counts his banter occasionally • cedric is very amused by vivienne's new friendship, not seeing her this happy for years • vivienne is extremely upset when cedric decides to enter himself for the triwizard tournament • she doesn't want him getting hurt but cedric insists that he'll be okay • she confides in fred over her fears, worried about losing cedric like she lost atlas • they grow closer when vivienne begins to turn to him for comfort • and, of course, there would be the typical cute "i smell vivienne" and "i smell fred" in an amortentia scene • failure to acknowledge their feelings as it usually is in slow burns • would 'hang out' during hogsmeade trips but everyone knows they're on a date and won't call it a date • vivienne assumes she'll be cedric's date for the yule ball but ha! turns out he wants to go with jessa • vivienne is stumped, and just decided she doesn't want to go • george knocks some sense into fred and tells him to shoot his shot • fred asks vivienne, but she tells him he needs to prove himself first • fred has no idea what that means, of course • he decides on giving her a scavenger hunt and after every clue, he writes a compliment for her • vivienne is really touched because she never hears the kinds of things fred says about her, especially at home • he often does cheesy stuff like this for her and she loves it • they go to the yule ball together and basically make heart eyes with each other on the dance floor • after the yule ball, however, vivienne starts getting really bad nightmares about her brother's death • fred tries to help her as much as he can • cedric is often the one speaking to her softly and trying to get her to calm down • vivienne begs cedric not to complete the tournament in fear for his life • cedric thinks she's being cautious because of her nightmares and dismisses her • :( • she's really not the same after cedric's death • she won't talk to anyone — not even jessa or fred • she just wants to be alone because she thinks it's her fault
this was all i had imagined for goblet of fire. in relation to fred's death, though, i always knew vivienne would die alongside him in the war. i made this note in my phone (this was actually the first note in my phone) so many years ago, thought i would share it lol. btw: vivienne's original name in the first writing of this book was camille:
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