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One Mistake, Ten lies

Author: PRNTAI

Reviewer: Shivani_SwaSan

PS : First of all, I'm so, so, soooo sorry for being late 😭😭 My schedule was really hectic this month but finally, here you go with your review :-

Chapters read : 5

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Cover :

A good cover for your storyline. You have blended the pictures of your characters very well and the dark shade in the background portrays the dark theme of your story. So, a good work here. Credit goes to the lovely editor!

Title :

'One Mistake Ten Lies', must say, you've chosen a creative title for your story so kudos to you! It brought so many imaginations in my head, you have got a pretty eye catching title here. Even when it didn't suit much to the first couple of chapters, later on, it really did. If I am right, the title was for your female lead who was married to Taehyung and maybe that was her mistake. And there were quite a few lies told to Jungkook by Taehyung, regarding Prin, I suppose. This was truly mind boggling ❤

You have already done your job with your cover and title. It pulled me towards your book like a magnet. Kudos to you for choosing a suitable title for your story dear.

Plot/Storyline :

The way you began with Taehyung and Prin's first night after their marriage, it spoke a lot about how your characters were going to be. Prin's povs were really adorable, the way you portrayed things from her perspective, it made me yearn to get more of her. Her breakdown, her cuteness, her thoughts, they were quite realistic. But somewhere, I feel that she seems a bit confused about how she really feels. Maybe it is indeed her cute character.

From fourth part onwards, I could finally connect your story with the title and it also gave a partial insight about how Taehyung feels about Prin. I really wish to learn more about Prin, Taehyung and Jungkook because they seem really realistic. I definitely will, sometime in future ❤

There is hardly any point to pick up in this story, because overall your story is pretty interesting and intriguing. Keep it up dear, all the best.

Grammar :

Your grammar is pretty good, and so is your sentence construction. The way you have delivered the dialogues of each character, it kept me going with the flow. Use of fancy words were a cherry on top!! There are some minor grammatical mistakes here and there, mostly tense related or some typing errors. But I'm sure you will correct them after you do your proof reading once. Otherwise, keep it up for a well framed grammar.

Fascination :

Emotions were at it's peak! I really could feel Prin's emotions and turmoil. Prin was really relatable to me. However, Taehyung is still not completely under the spotlight yet, and that's okay because things about him are slowly getting revealed as I read on and on. Same goes for Jungkook. Character development does take time so that the story gets more intriguing.

You really left me wondered what will happen at the end!!! I am excited to know what will happen and how will things work out for Taehyung and Prin. That's just it, you have the ability to create enthusiasm in a reader's mind. And Jungkook, I really like him too. He knows what's right and what's wrong and he easily caught Taehyung's lie. That reveals more about his good-guy character. Your characters and your plot have really boosted my fascination ❤

So keep it up dear, because the rate of fascination is hundred percent here!

Overall :

A rare plot, an intriguing storyline, a good grammar and realistism! ❤ Just some things to be improved and we are good to go!

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