Thank you for noticing me :,-)
This is my first story, so I'm not sure how I feel. I would really like people to tell me how I can improve the story (if anyone sees this lol). I originally wanted the story to be creepy, but I'm not sure if it is. If you know a way I can make it creepier, I would gladly like to hear your thoughts.
Hello, this is me, three years later. I actually completely forgot about this story LMAO. If I had to rewrite it I would spend more time making the way she views herself more creepy and I would add wayyyy more gore to the ending. It ends so abruptly but this is such a hidden treasure in my memories so I'm going to leave it like this loll.
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Don't Look
Short StoryMaryanne is a very insecure girl who has dealt with quite a lot of bullying throughout her life. Soon enough, it gets to the point where she can't even look at herself.
