Reviewed by Khloe
Story by bored_outofmymind
Cover
I like this cover, it's good and well done. You have a good title that is readable and you can see that it is a paranormal mystery so people know about it right off the bat, the only thing i think is a bit iffy that you should put your username instead of your genuine name so people know that it's your story and can find you easily.
Description
I love this description, you did it so perfectly and it goes with the theme of your story and it's making me want to read the story and see what is happening :)))))
Story
I do like this story and where you are going with it and I don't really have anything else to say to it apart from if you want to keep your readers then I think you should update a little more regularly and also try to add in an authors note at the end of the chapters so that you engage with your readers.
Khloe xo
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