Written by neptuneIwriting
Cover
I really like your cover. It goes really well with your story. However, I do feel that you should put your name at the bottom. Also, that wolf is gorgeous! Good job on the cover! :) Just a little to much space between the lettering with moon but other than that it's fine.
Summary
That description is just wow! The way you've written such an amazing cliffhanger so casually is well...im speechless. It 100% makes me intrigued to read more.
CHAPTER ONE
Good cover, good description and a good opening. You might have bagged yourself 10/10. Okay, I do recommend you put their thoughts in italic though. I haven't got much else to say. Everything seems perfect so far. An author note would be splendid.
Overall
Absolutely perfect! I have no words. You seriously have talent going on here! The only downfalls I would say you have is communication with your readers. Do some author notes so we get to know you.
POSITIVES
☆Cover
☆Description
☆Writing style
NEGATIVES
☆Author notes
TIPS
☆By doing author notes, you are allowing the readers to get to know you.
10/10
♡Keep on going♡
Sarah
YOU ARE READING
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