Written by Celemenia
Honestly worth the read!
Cover
I like this cover, it looks like you've put lot of detail into it which is great. Well done on it. However, I dont think the blue goes.
Summary
It seems a bit long. Reading it, you've definately made your description intriguing. It's got detail and really does pull you in.
Chapter One
Good starting point. Well written. You've described the characters well and that map looks amazing.
Overall
I really enjoyed reading this. I honestly wish there was more I could say but there truly isnt. I've spent an hour trying to think of what to say but you've got talent here. You honestly deserve to have this published. You dont seem to have any spelling errors. A few chapters seemed shorter than the rest but other than that, your story is amazing.
Positives
•Everything
10/10
♡KEEP GOING♡
Sarah
YOU ARE READING
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