ʙᴏᴏᴋ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡs (ᴠᴏʟ. 2) - ʙʏ: ᴛʜᴀᴛɢɪʀʟʙᴇᴀᴜᴛʏ

ʙᴏᴏᴋ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ #8

ᴛɪᴛʟᴇ: Starfish

ᴀᴜᴛʜᴏʀ: sandpapertongue

ɢᴇɴʀᴇ: General Fiction

Cᴏᴠᴇʀ sᴛᴀʀ ʀᴀᴛɪɴɢ: ☆☆☆☆

ᴛᴏᴘ 3 ʙᴇsᴛ ǫᴜᴀʟɪᴛɪᴇs:

①. Description - Your description is engrossing as well as straightforward. You give just enough to pull readers in.

②. Writing Style/Chapter Lengths - You have a pleasant style of writing and your chapters are satisfying lengths.

③. Potential - This story has a lot of potential. It's off to a great start, has a lot of room for plot twists, and the concept is different.

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sᴜɢɢᴇsᴛᴇᴅ ɪᴍᴘʀᴏᴠᴇᴍᴇɴᴛs:

①. I noticed that you write a second part to every chapter. Be careful with that tactic, it can be very rewarding if done correctly but if not your story progression could slow down and your book will start to suffer.

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ᴍʏ ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴᴀʟ ᴄᴏᴍᴍᴇɴᴛ:

♡. Keep it up! This is good work keep updating. I believe you're on to something. I hope you figure out what it is, grab on to it and refine it!

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ᴏᴠᴇʀᴀʟʟ sᴛᴀʀ ʀᴀᴛɪɴɢ: ☆☆☆

ᴡᴏᴜʟᴅ ɪ ʀᴇᴄᴏᴍᴍᴇɴᴅ ᴛʜɪs ʙᴏᴏᴋ?: Yes.

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08/13/2018