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The following draft is a first draft of my most current manuscript. I've decided to publish it, to get some feedback. At the end of each chapter there will be a list of questions, if you have time and you'd like to answer I ask that you do it helps so much.
Now I ask only one thing out of you
HONESTY
if you don't like something
Comment
If you do like something
Letta girl know
I'm not really looking for Grammatical errors
More like
What do you think of this character?
Or does this choice seem out of character?
Or plot holes that I don't see
DU LIEST GERADE
Mark Of The Divine
FantasyCalypso Laskaris' fate was sealed. She was to remain as the Infamous Withdocor of Pyria, just as she was to train her younger brother, Myron for the Trials of the Triad, a series of life-threatening trials in order to determine the future leaders of...