Hello! I know, I know I finished this story, but I think I'm going to rewrite it. Tell me parts you liked/disliked so I can include/get rid of them when I rewrite it. I'm not sure when I'm going to get to it, but I'm just not happy with the way this story turned out. I liked the ending, but I think Shawna and Charlie's relationship started out way too quickly and their situation was too fast-paced and unrealistic. If anyone else agrees, please tell me. I need as much constructive criticism as I can get.
Pwease and fanks :3
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He Loves Me Back.... Probably
RomanceHi. My name is Shawna Duncan. I've gotten myself into a bit of a situation and I need advice. Tell me, what do you do when you finally realize (even though it wasn’t a secret to you) that you’re in love (and in lust) with your best friend’s (beyond...
