This was a story I wrote in 5 days for a school project. It was the longest story in the class, but it still felt rushed. I don't know to make the story flow better without rushing it or drawing it out too much. Any tips would be greatly appreciated. Constructive criticism is welcomed and encouraged. This is my first fiction work so I need the tips. Thank you so much!
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Leo and Oli- Another take on Romeo and Juliet
Short StoryLeonardo Summers is a 17 year old boy with a secret. His mother has arranged a marriage with one of his best friends. Neither of them want to be married. What happens when Leonardo meets the Romeo to his Juliet? Will this story end as tragically as...
