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review by themissperfect

slyons246-

I loved your book. It's addictive, it's well written, it's a fun read.

The best part of the story is the storyline. It might be a bad boy bad girl game story, it's still different from the rest.

I like the characters of the book, specially the strong headed Alex; though sometimes, she gets extremely bitchy, but yeah... Its real.

You have made quite a few spelling/punctuation mistakes, but I guessed your story is unedited so, ok. I would just bring it to your notice, edit it.

Also, you missed to mention who's pov it is, in a few places. While I know, it's supposed to be Alex's, it would still be better if you mention it.

All in all, I really enjoyed reading your book, couldn't stop till I finished it. I hope you will update soon; I want to know where the game goes 😉

Sorry for being rude, if I was.

Keep writing

Lots of love
Aisha