Hi, this is a story that I've been working on for a while, but this is only the original draft. I'll post the real thing when it's closer to being done, and I'll take this down, but until then, I'll keep this up. Sorry that there are issues with the whole fact that some things have been changed since, and there are lots of loose ends that will be tied up it the improved version.
FOr now, enjoy the story, comment what you think, how I could improve it and your overall opinion.
Bye! Erin <3
