🙊 Mystery/Thriller Results

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Hello, everyone!

I present to you, with a not-at-all-small delay, and yet still here, the reviews for category Mystery/Thriller! 😅

This wouldn't have been at all possible without:
Kailucy
Milestunes_xx
@ninpanibright

Thank you! 💕💖

I'm really sorry I won't be able to provide results for the rest of the categories! 🙇

The past year has been much busier for me than predicted, and it seems to get even more hectic, so I won't be starting any new contests for a while.

Happy holidays to everyone celebrating the orthodox Easter! 🐣🪺

Love you all! 😘💋

🙊❤️‍🔥🙊

🥇Agent X
by ScribbleYourThoughts

Judge: Kailucy

Writing style: 10/10
Pacing: 14/15
Setting: 9/10
Character descriptions: 9/10
Dialogue: 9/10
Plot: 19/20
Character development: 13/15
Overall enjoyment: 10/10

Total: 93/100

So far, I'm really enjoying this. The characters are wonderful, and I'd love to learn more about them. The dialogue feels realistic; a few sentences felt a little off, but it wasn't bad. The pacing is decent, and I like that it's taking time to build up. I look forward to reading more when I have more time.

🙊🙀🙊

🥇Still
by AhmedSKA

Judge: Ash Donovan

Writing style: 9/10
Pacing: 14/15
Setting: 9/10
Character descriptions: 9/10
Dialogue: 9/10
Plot: 20/20
Character development: 13/15
Overall enjoyment: 10/10

Total: 93/100

This story will make a great horror movie! I love how the characters are described in the first chapter via photographs. It's an approach I don't see often. And it all gets super interesting right away. When the characters are having an important emotional moment, the scene seems a bit rushed, and I did see a few grammar issues... for example, instead of "Infront" it should be "in front", but the whole composition is so spot on, I barely paid any attention to them.

I love it!

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🥈Curse of Rose de Winter
by flowersforleah

Judge: Milestunes_xx

Writing style: 9/10
Pacing: 12.5/15
Setting: 7.5/10
Character descriptions: 7.5/10
Dialogue: 9.5/10
Plot: 17/20
Character development: 12.5/15
Overall enjoyment: 8.5/10

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