Pawesome Awards 2023

🐰 New Adult Results

Three months later...
Results for category New Adult are finally here! 😅💦

I don't post the certificates here, but I promise they're pretty, so message me your mail if you want them. 😉

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🥇Tale of the Princess
by ScribbleYourThoughts

Writing style: 10/10
Pacing: 15/15
Setting: 10/10
Character descriptions: 10/10
Dialogue: 10/10
Plot: 20/20
Character development: 15/15
Overall enjoyment: 10/10

Total: 100/100

The story starts with a moderate pace, not rushing through the presentation of the main character and her family... but as for me, the real fun begins after chapter 5. I love how the tale of Ziya is portrayed in chapter 3. I also love chapter 6 a tad bit more than the rest, mainly because of what happens at the end of the chapter. I'm not being specific for obvious spoiler reasons 😆🥰 but I definitely recommend it. 👌

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🥇The Crown Prince's Bellydancer
by Mila_333

Writing style: 10/10
Pacing: 15/15
Setting: 10/10
Character descriptions: 10/10
Dialogue: 10/10
Plot: 20/20
Character development: 15/15
Overall enjoyment: 10/10

Total: 100/100

The plot is realistic. Settings and characters are described in a way that makes it easy for the reader to get engulfed in the story as if they're watching the scene as it is unfolding. The main character quickly wins the reader's sympathy and keeps them engaged. Side characters are also three-dimensional and unique. In short, I love it!

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🥇The Stolen Crown
by CAMoltzau

Writing style: 10/10
Pacing: 15/15
Setting: 10/10
Character descriptions: 10/10
Dialogue: 10/10
Plot: 20/20
Character development: 15/15
Overall enjoyment: 10/10

Total: 100/100

Characters are very well described. Each of them is unique, with a distinctive personality and style. I could imagine everything in great detail. Plot is interesting, and it catches the reader's attention without a fail. Overall, I love it!

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🥈Wherever I Am
by daled79

Writing style: 10/10
Pacing: 14/15
Setting: 10/10
Character descriptions: 10/10
Dialogue: 10/10
Plot: 19/20
Character development: 15/15
Overall enjoyment: 10/10

Total: 98/100

You start really strong with the first chapter. I love how it turned out. The plot is interesting. Descriptions of the setting, characters, and action are great. Characters are well-rounded and expertly crafted. Overall, it's a highly enjoyable read.

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🥉A Heartbeat Away
by diana_leone

Writing style: 9/10
Pacing: 15/15
Setting: 8/10
Character descriptions: 10/10
Dialogue: 8/10
Plot: 18/20
Character development: 15/15
Overall enjoyment: 10/10

Total: 93/100

Pacing is very good. Characters are relatable and well developed, and their descriptions are great. I loved the ending as well. It totally wasn't what I was expecting, and it worked well for the story. Overall, I enjoyed reading it.

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4️⃣ A Girl Like Her
by blackishfever

Writing style: 10/10
Pacing: 14/15
Setting: 5/10
Character descriptions: 10/10
Dialogue: 9/10
Plot: 18/20
Character development: 15/15
Overall enjoyment: 10/10

Total: 91/100

I like Linyu. I kinda ship him more than Noel. It looks like the rumours about him might not be true, but yet again, I might be wrong... 🤔 The characters are really well-developed, and their descriptions are perfect. A little bit more time could be divided on describing the setting, but that's the only fault I could find, and believe me, I was looking.🔍 The story is interesting. It's paced well. Overall, I love it!

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5️⃣ Seesaw
by strawberry1d

Writing style: 7/10
Pacing: 12/15
Setting: 6/10
Character descriptions: 9/10
Dialogue: 8/10
Plot: 20/20
Character development: 14/15
Overall enjoyment: 10/10

Total: 86/100

I like that you've used photos to illustrate the setting, and characters are described very well. I love the soulmate system, and the plot is extremely interesting. I was constantly in anticipation of that one moment when they realised they're each other's soulmate. However, at some points during flashbacks, it feels like you're only briefing the reader on what happened and rushing through some scenes in order to get to the present timeline faster. Some events could be described in more detail. I've also noticed a few verbs in the present tense.

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6️⃣ The Secret behind the Blogger
by Withered_Flowers12

Writing style: 6/10
Pacing: 11/15
Setting: 5/10
Character descriptions: 6/10
Dialogue: 8/10
Plot: 18/20
Character development: 9/15
Overall enjoyment: 10/10

Total: 73/100

The plot is interesting, but the story will become even better after slowing down the pace a little bit. You could describe the scenes in more detail and emphasise characters' emotions as the action is unfolding. I couldn't empathize with the characters.

Paragraphs cut sentences midway, but it's probably Wattpad's fault. I know how hard it is to edit a chapter from the app version. There are also some grammar and spelling mistakes that might need attention.

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