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Your title is daring along with the book cover that shows two silhouettes of bodies one male and the other female. It's good but makes the font of your username bigger to show ownership. Your blurb is long and adds taste to the book however you rush into the past of the characters too quickly. Make it slow. We know Alice has parental issues but not exactly what kind. In the first chapter, you quickly killed the mood between Alice and her best friend but very quickly you added embarrassment into the mix as well when she was caught watching Toby.That is good, remember to keep it subtle. I noticed no grammatical errors or mistakes in grammatical marks in your chapters.
