feedback :)

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hello so im definitely posting part 25 today bc im on a roll BUT i wld jst like to ask for some feedback ! bc honestly not the proudest of the first few chapters but ig it helps the flow :) anyway i wanted 2 know what parts y'all like abt this story and where i can improve, like abt mahitos personality or etc. as well as how far u want this story to go-- bc ive only planned till a certain part but i wld love to know.

anyway i love writing this honestly mahito is such a child yet despite his personality he seems like he'd be loyal af like a wittle puppy but who knows HAHA wld love to see what yall think :)

hope u hv a great day :)

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