Forbidden Arrow

Carmela had the perfect friends, the perfect school, the dream life. She was the girl everyone wanted to be and the girl every guy wanted to have. Until, she changed from popular to avoided--forgotten.  But one crazy night seals her fate as she meets someone, someone that is willing to show her things that she has never seen before, opened her eyes to a new world. Someone that filled the hole made her feel like herself again. But, before she even gets his name she is left with alone with half a phone number.  When they meet again strange things start happening, mystery notes, creepy voice, eerie walks home, and people threatening her life. Carmela begins to feel unsafe in the neighbourhood she's grown up in. Soon they're both thrown into a life altering situation, which they have rush against the clock to survive. Besides, will she ever get that phone number? 
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I really like this, you have a great imagination and good chose of words :) I also just LOVE the cover, by the way!
Your descriptions are amazing, even though it's just the Prologue.
I bet the further chapters are even better.
Interesting story, good job! :)
this was really awesome!!

a great torturing cliffhanger at the end!! :P

u wrote this really well!! :D

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this is intense it got me drawn like a magnet!  love the music video you pick for the story keep uploding :)
This was so intense, you got me hooked in and i really want to know what happens next :) No error's i can see and your writing style is pretty awesome :)
The blurb made it sound interesting and it was a really intriguing beginning and made me ask lots of questions. Well done!


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