I like all the description and drama you put into the first chapter. I think it is a pretty good story so far.
what happen did she die...im like.depresse right now does this.story have a second book..
I cant get to the next chapter no matter what I do :( I want to read it bnut sortive cant. STupid thing wont take me to the next chapter.
Funny and entertaining, I was actually reading the ending half smiling the whole time.
i really enjoyed your writing style , and i also feel bad for her :/ anyways great chapter :))
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| Name | Danilynn Louvel |
| Location | Indiana |
| Member Since | Nov 15, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 8,176 |