The Marked by taylor_luvs

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The Marked by taylor_luvs

DESCRIPTION:-

Starr will discover a whole new world full of things she could never imagine.

Incomplete

Rating:- 8 /10

My opinion:-

This is another really good story full of drama and mystery! I think this story is good and has a long future ahead however you lost marks as it was bit rushed and confusing. Slow it down and it'll be perfect. However as you have progressed it has got better. Also paragraphs!!

Keep going!!

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