Forbidden Love by Mira_xxox

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Forbidden Love by Mira_xxox

DESCRIPTION:

Kevin Black was accused of killing a six year old girl after finding him in the crime scene holding a gun in his hand. He kept on claiming that he was innocent, but the clues did not do him well.

Melody Chance was a well known lawyer. She has never failed once in her job, and did not take a no for an answer.

One day, she was hired by Kevin who seemed to tell her the whole story. She did not believe him at first, but she did at last.

She was loyal to Kevin

He was truthful with Melody.

Months passed ...

They felt something for each other; feelings that were only forbidden...

Incomplete

Rating: 8.5/10

My opinion:

It's good. It's really unique and quite detailed. I think to get it to the full 10 you should do a prologue which shows the first paragraph of the description in a bit more detail, say from maybe the moment that the police walk in on him but not including what's before? I think that would make it perfect!!

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