My dear wonderful readers,
I thought I might just take a quick moment and tell you about some plot changes that I need to make before I finish the next chapter of the story.
The first one is that I am going to make the story happen before Captain Hook's hand gets chopped off. It just seems fitting since it's before Wendy and it's a big part of Peter's story as well. I'm not quite sure if I accentuated that enough at the beginning but it's a start.
The second one is that I'm going to be adding more of the relationship between Midnight Lilly and Vincent. I feel like I kind of just glazed over them and it just popped up later on. I love those two characters so I really want to make sure they have the screen time that they deserve. This will be later though. I want to keep this story going.
That's really everything for now!
If you have any new ideas for me to try, please put your comments in below. I love hearing from you!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting and voting! You guys are the best!
Your fellow reader and writer,
Laura :D
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Red-Handed Jill (A Peter Pan Fanfiction)
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