On One Faithful Night

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Hey everyone! So I decided to write a song, and yea! Feedback would be great, thanks :3

"So Done Trying"- by Me, Caitlan McLerran.

When I look around this room,
I see the ones who say- they care,
When I sit by the fire,
I see the ones who say- "it'll be okay"..
But I know that it won't be,
Cause even when you're with me,
I feel so alone..

(Chorus)
I spend my time fighting!
Looking for that something,
That just doesn't exist, oh!
Don't put all your lies on me!
You say- it'll be oh-k!
When you don't want to stay!
Just walk the other way!
Cause I'm already,
So done trying..

Why do I try so hard?
Because I know now- that it never works out.
Why do I keep fighting?
I waste my time trying- to figure out- why it hurts..
Hours upon hours,
I'm still sitting in that room!
Wondering why I feel so empty, oh

I spend my time fighting!
Looking for that something,
That just doesn't exist, oh!
Don't put all your lies on me!
You say- it'll be oh-k!
When you don't want to stay!
Just walk the other way!
Cause I'm already,
So done trying..

O-oo-oo-oh..

(Piano solo not yet thought out lol)
I try- I do-, but why..
Do I feel empty?
So lonely?
Discarded, mistreated,
So worthless, and stupid..?

I swear if I think of you now,
I might just fall- to the ground,
I used to be so fucking happy,
But now I'm stuck just feeling empty..

O-oo-oo-oh..

I spend my time fighting!
Looking for that something,
That just doesn't exist, oh!
Don't put all your lies on me!
You say- it'll be oh-k!
When you don't want to stay!
Just walk the other way!
Cause I'm already,
So done trying..

Yea..

I am so done trying..