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Broken Dreams

Broken Dreams

617 Reads 17 Votes 4 Part Story
wolfy By wolfspirit395 Updated Jan 05, 2011

a 19 year old boy named Demaro and his 21 year old brother Bleck are stable boys that share the dream of becomeing part of the kings dragon rider army called the "white dragons" serveing in the war batween their clan the tallon takers and their rival, the nest raiders. only to be turned down, but his brother accepted. leaveing damro to fight on the ground. haveing lost his mother after he was born, demaro will lose more than his mother. he will discover new people, new and rare abilitys and a creature that will change his life forever. he must fight an epic battle to survive, over come obsticals and tame the wild to make things right again. will he succseed in his journy or will he be struck down by the enemy or does his fate lie in the claws of the very creatures of which he controles.

wolfspirit395 wolfspirit395 Mar 11, 2011
@Arintez :D haha yeah im 15, 16 in august lol
                              and thanks, i dont see myself as a good writer but thank you for your kind comment :) and im also glad you enjoy my stroy 
                              haha yep, im australian and i love wolves :)
                              nice to meet you btw :)
wolfspirit395 wolfspirit395 Nov 16, 2010
im working on chapter 3 as we speek :) it should be up soon ^^
Draconis Draconis Nov 10, 2010
Wow, this is a really great start! I love how you started this with a battle.  Keep it up :D
cute_angelz cute_angelz Nov 10, 2010
this is reeeeeeaaaaaallllllyyyyyyyy goooooooood!!!!
cute_angelz cute_angelz Nov 09, 2010
                              I. LOVE. THIS. STORY!!! <3 
                              but seriously... upload =p
wolfspirit395 wolfspirit395 Nov 07, 2010
thanks :)
                              and thank you i will make a group soon ^^ possibly after i post chapter 3