Deep Secrets

Deep Secrets

37.5K Reads 2K Votes 19 Part Story
Mr shadow By kevin_shadow Completed

Izaya questions all he ever works and lives for. Then when finding the answer he looses himself completely. Spiraling into a depression he can't pull himself out of. He laughs at himself when found at his lowest point by the last person he wanted to be seen by


Warning// deep fanfiction. Trigger warning for some people don't like don't read. Thank you

  • anime
  • comfort
  • depression
  • duarara
  • fanfiction
  • hurt
  • izaya
  • shizaya
  • shizuo
  • yaoi
KittyTiara KittyTiara Jun 10
I wouldn't say the grammar is great, but I can't complain because I am probably worse.  I also appreciate the effort.
Hehehehehehehee... is that soo?..
                              *2 hours later* 
                              (Izaya and shizu staring at me.)
                              Me: just f@ck eachother plz!
XDarkLunaXx XDarkLunaXx May 02
Quick advice: you switched from 3rd person to 1st person. At least put: "Izaya's POV" on top
Dodomka Dodomka Aug 14
The story itself is pretty good, but somehow, the style and grammar mistakes just tick me off too much. Sorry, I'm not trying to be rude or anything. You already wrote more then I was able to, but in my opinion, you could practice the writing itself a bit. It needs a slight fixing.
figendog figendog Dec 30, 2016
Here is one example of bad grammar since you asked me to point the mistakes out.