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Great and Greater

Great and Greater

2.5K Reads 58 Votes 6 Part Story
Berry Hall By berryhall Updated Mar 16, 2011

Aerie has spent her entire life being taught to hate vampires but now she's joining them. From her incapcitated state she awakens to find herself filled with the most immense pain imaginable-the pain of the start of the transformation. What will become of her? Will she become a blood thirsty vampire or will she get her wish and be merciful? Will she reign terror alongside her inlaws-to-be and her newly transformed lover? Will she even survive the horrors of the transformation? 
Great and Greater. 

Jay-Me Jay-Me Jan 10, 2011
@berryhall nooo intense in a good way :) i love the way you write it seems so..just cant explain it :)
berryhall berryhall Jan 10, 2011
@Jay-Me Sorries.....but that's kinda the essense of it. Intense. Awful. Painful. Bad...and then you're a vampire. 
berryhall berryhall Jan 10, 2011
@NikSmith Haha thank you and you're welcome. It was your comment that got me to finish it so I thought it was deserved. :) 
Chocolate_addict Chocolate_addict Nov 15, 2010
Upload soon please!! I love this story and I'm curious as to what happens to Ben and aerie now that they are both becoming full vamps.... 
ashmendall ashmendall Nov 11, 2010
you should definitely finish this story and post soon
                              I read vampire and slayer yesterday and need to finish the whole story
                              i love your writing style and poison was great by the way
berryhall berryhall Oct 31, 2010
@4badco of course. Ill work on chapter two. the next four chapters or so will be flashbacks and torture mostly though. Transformation. It heats up after that though and starts to get good :)