Lucy's parents die, now she is stuck with her sister. This mysterious guy comes into her life. Now she has to choose between good and evil. That's hard to do when you don't know what's good and what's evil.
Just started having a read your writing and description is really good, let you know as I read on.
@lefrenchman14, I will fix it. I try to do that with most of mine, thanks. :)
whoa. . . .This seems really interesting so far! : )
Awesome job : )
haha!! the peanuts, more ice cream, the messed up price, im loving you as each chapter goes by!!
Throwing peanuts. Interesting joy. lol
Yeah, as ninja muffins said, you're a good writer! I'm getting into this story already! haha
Ah, it seems interesting so far!!! haha, different!
I'mma voting! You've written it well!