If the Shoe Fits (Completed)

If the Shoe Fits (Completed)

47.8K Reads 1.4K Votes 7 Part Story
Madeline Taylor By tiptoe13 Completed

What would you do if a mysterious admirer started sending you love notes under the name 'Prince Charming'? Would you attempt to discover his identity or just enjoy the mystery?

"A delicate rose just beginning to bloom was on her bedspread. The color was such a deep hue of red it seemed almost painted; as if should you hold it upside down the color would drip from its petals and onto the floor in scarlet rivers."

In this modern take on Cinderella (with a few twists of course), Ailia finds herself exactly in that position with a lovely ball gown and unknown escort. Add in her best friend Bibi, who begins recieving notes from an admirer of her own, and you've got yourself a modern fairy tale.

I love your stories but sometimes I wish it was in first person. The POV changed a lot
Belldaryeal Belldaryeal Feb 10, 2013
Wow i normally check  the comments 2 c if its a good book and they are all great especally since this is the first chapter. I guess I should read it then since every1 says its good :)
SilverRaindrops SilverRaindrops May 31, 2012
Oh my god, I totally wish I was in her shoes! I bet my buttons that her secret admirer is an actual Prince! Well, this is a Cinderella story, right?
attheendofnoreturn attheendofnoreturn Nov 24, 2011
I love this! I usually don't like Cinderella type stories or romance for that matter but you have me hooked on this one!
ScissorZombie ScissorZombie Sep 29, 2011
I loved it sooo far :D Honestly,kept me focused the whole time, I love the way you describe and I'll be reading more of this :)
TheKeyofE TheKeyofE Jul 06, 2011
!!!  I haven't seen a good story like this for a long time... okay, well maybe I have, but this one is definitely keeping my interest... I've voted, now commenting, and am going to put it in my library.  Fanning also may be on the list. :D