The Love Curse

The Love Curse

71 Part Story 11.5M Reads 109K Votes
REBECCA SKY By RebeccaSky Completed

She can't kiss the boy she loves. If she kisses him she'll lose him forever... Rachel Reeds has the ability to make any guy she kisses fall in love with her─head over heels, completely, irrevocably, obsessed love. The problem is she doesn't want someone to love her because she "forced" them with her "ability." She wants them to love her because they want to.
    
    When she starts to fall for cadet Benjamin Blake, she distances herself. But circumstances beyond her control bring them closer, and the desire to be with him tears her apart. Will she resist the pull of a first kiss, or will she lose Ben forever?

therinamartins therinamartins May 10, 2016 05:17PM
Opposites attract, I would say. But I like Rachel's restraint in not doing everything for her own gain, unlike Melissa. Very good start.
user57012158 user57012158 May 24, 2016 05:31PM
Hey I really enjoyed your story! You should post more! You are really good! If you wouldn't mind checking out and commenting or voting on Chapter 1 of my book Supernatural story it'd mean a lot ☺️☺️❤️❤️
daydreamer704 daydreamer704 Mar 30, 2016 11:38PM
Interesting chapter..I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Matuchan Matuchan Apr 01, 2016 10:56AM
That would surely bring me a small heart attack😱😨😲😢
AGhostsWhisper AGhostsWhisper May 02, 2016 10:33PM
:( okay so I do feel a little bad for her home life, but it's not as bad as Rachel's tbh with her insane mum
You create a very likeable, believable character. I really enjoyed reading this!