The love of the king

The love of the king

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Forbidden_Typer By Forbidden_Typer Completed

This story is about King Thranduil and Mayia . This story takes place in Mirkwood after Thranduil finds Mayia in the river after a Orc Attack. The main Question is Will he Protect and love her Or let her slip away.

I DO NOT own any JRR.Tolkien characters. The only character I Own so Far is Mayia.


  • forever
  • hechanges
  • jrrtolkien
  • legolas
  • lordoftherings
  • lovestory
  • thehobbit
  • theirstory
  • thepast
  • thranduil
starlaya starlaya Jun 27
Not to be impolite or enything but elves calls the sons for ioneg not yando
I like it so far, but maybe you should watch out for our punctuation a little and build up a little more tension until they meet by using some more description of the place she is in and so on. Everything is pretty straight forward, which is different to many other fan fictions.
Very short and odd taking areas kinda makes me not want to read it
I feel the beginning is a little to rushed. If you don't mind i would like to edit it for you.
Oreo-Potter Oreo-Potter Jun 21, 2015
It's a great story so far but isn't Haldir supposed to be in Lothlorien??
Forbidden_Typer Forbidden_Typer Apr 16, 2015
@oneil43 you didn't sound mean at all! yes this story is going very was but it plays a very Important part in the future of the story later in this book and the 2nd book. thank you for reading