The Step Brother

The Step Brother

99K Reads 3.5K Votes 13 Part Story
Lillian Grant By gemofanivory Updated Mar 11

Eliana Strauss is a shell of the girl she once was, broken beyond repair because of a dark secret, a secret closely entwined with that of her step brother's own dark intentions, a secret with the power to destroy her entire world.

She used to have the perfect, loving relationship with her step brother, Nikolai.  But now their relationship is anything but normal and perfect.

When Eliana has to stay with him for an entire year, things start to change, once again.  All her handsome step brother has ever wanted was to love her and care for her, but in anything but a brotherly manner.

This is a darker story with more adult themes, so read with caution.   There will be some sexual content. Rated PG-13, but may later be changed to R.  

This is the new version of the story.

  • brother
  • dangerous
  • dark
  • fiction
  • kiss
  • past
  • romance
  • step
  • stepbrother
  • teen
  • twisted
Like a candle.. dripping and melting more and more, the longer it burns from the flame sat on its tip
This was really good... i love the descriptive language and i love reading books like this because you can really imagine what she was feeling
It was really good and descriptive but my attention span is really short so I got bored fast and just skimmed it but what I skimmed was good
Geez Louise, these description give me life and I absolutely love them!!! This is wonderful so far
JustBeingBlunt JustBeingBlunt Aug 21, 2016
You are a greater writer! Your descriptive writing is on point
AliWarren3 AliWarren3 Oct 04, 2016
Your writing is spectacular. You have such way with words. Very descriptive. Something I've been trying to master for so long. Very good.