The Princess Competition

The Princess Competition

82.6K Reads 3.1K Votes 16 Part Story
nessa™ By starysmiles Completed

The Princess Competition.

Brains may save you over beauty.

The event of a lifetime. 

20 girls are chosen to compete. 5 being either orphans or from the very low class of society with no money. The other 15 are of the high class and more rich population. This event is to win the princes heart and throne. Challenges and clues are hidden throughout the castle, these are to help gain the princes heart, lean the standings more in your favour. Evangeline was an orphan, still getting over the fact that she was, even though she been in the same orphanage for almost eleven years. When she gets chosen to compete there in unyielding happiness, and she wants to win, not only for a better life, but because that prince is super hot! 

**going under major editing/ re-write cause I wrote this when I was 13**

A/N: for any fan art just PM me (I looooove fan art ;)! Thanks again!!!!

  • competition
  • fiction
  • love
  • prince
  • princess
  • romance
NyteEve NyteEve Mar 31
remind me of the original movie Annie. The girl with the red hair and everything but a nicer caretaker.
ashley_768 ashley_768 Oct 22, 2016
I really feel bad for orphans when they are treated badly. Thank God its different for Evangeline.
                              My mom died when i was a child and my dad passed away several months ago.
                              I am an orphan now. But i thank God that i didnt go to an orphanage.
ChaoticDreamer ChaoticDreamer Sep 25, 2016
I love the fact that this went in a completely different direction than I expected. In most stories that lady probably would have smacked her or something. It's a great change of pace!
RiddlerHerThis RiddlerHerThis Aug 29, 2016
My eyes are that colour, the deep sea greenish blue one and my eyes can also be grey or just green or just blue.... My eyes are messed up
SnowyOwl55 SnowyOwl55 Jul 16, 2015
I like the longer paragraphs, they show more detail. I think you are doing a great job
not_a_hipster_ not_a_hipster_ Jun 30, 2015
Yay! I really enjoyed the first chapter! Can't wait to read the rest :)