Going Through the Motions

Going Through the Motions

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TNEvans By TNEvans Completed

Our choices are what define us. What determine who we are and how other people see us. 

Seventeen-year-old Penelope Chisholm has always chosen to be on the outside. A bit of a loner who finds her solace in running. Until she meets Gilbert Staal and decides he needs to be part of her life. Sure, it’s complicated but what relationship isn’t. She’s positive she’s found her future, but has to
decide if his temper is something she can deal with. 

Her twin brother, Ash, is her exact opposite. Editor of the school paper. Star pupil. Dating one of the most popular girls in school. Everything is perfect. Until he discovers that his sister is dating his new teacher. A teacher he wants to respect but can’t. He knows he should do something about it, but decides to give Penelope the opportunity to end things on her own. 

They’re both so sure their decision is the right one. Blinded by the rightness of their choice. But when Penelope ends up seriously hurt because of their choices, everyone is forced to re-evaluate the things
that have lead them to where they are and figure out how to move forward with their lives.

  • coming-of-age
  • hellphie
  • romance
  • secrets
  • student
  • teacher
  • teacher-student
  • thriller
  • twins
hopepixley hopepixley Mar 18, 2016
you know what I think. I think that you should just think of your self the way you want to be thought of
Fire_Beats_Snow Fire_Beats_Snow Jul 30, 2015
"I'm going through the motions but I don't feel like trying! The hole in my heart is growing bigger by the day, wish that I could crawl inside hide away!!!" Anyone else think of Cry- Alexx Calise
ISeekAGreaterPerhaps ISeekAGreaterPerhaps Jul 12, 2015
honestly wasn't surprised at the ending. I was 99 per cent sure he'd show up at school SOMEHOW and then when you said they'd have a sub- it was confirmed.
TNEvans TNEvans Apr 03, 2015
@stewie_the_thugg you're not the first person to mention that. This book was written before I'd ever heard of PLL. By the time it became super popular I had already finished this. there are similarities, but they're certainly not the same story.
stewie_the_thugg stewie_the_thugg Apr 02, 2015
I Am Surprised That Nobody Noticed That This Is Just Like "Pretty Little Liars" Except For How They Meet Its Different But Yeah So Far, A Lot Like Pretty Little Liars .
JennaMcLeod JennaMcLeod Jan 09, 2015
I really liked this story. Can anyone check out my story about Cameron Dallas? I just started and I need some help, please.