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My neighbor

My neighbor

182K Reads 5.2K Votes 27 Part Story
Shayra✏️ By shayragarciaa Completed

After her mother's death, Aurora and her dad move into the same neighborhood as her father's co-worker, but how was she supposed to know that his son would be a freaking god? Did i mention he's a player? Players never find true love, they just mess around with every girl existed. But will Aurora change his whole life, and make him drop on his knees for her. Is what he feels for Aurora real? Is this how love actually feels? And will Aurora love him back? Or will another boy make her heart beat faster?i {CLEANING AND EDITING}

I know not everyone's perfect but in my opinion i think you should practice your english about past, present, and future😊 i just got bothered but your story is great i love it btw☺️☺️
I highly suggest u edit extensively and make sure to use more words than say, then, and , and try to cut back on the unessisary  words
You spelt neighborhood wrong. Not trying to be mean. Just pointing that out.
Other than spelling, grammar, and punctuation, I like it sooo... its good.
Mary_FM Mary_FM Apr 14
Its so weird reading this. Love the plot but the spelling, grammar and punctuation are way off.
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