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Paloma's Choice

Paloma's Choice

3K Reads 67 Votes 18 Part Story
Katie By Katiebell Updated Nov 25, 2010

Being a princess has its perks: endless wealth, tons of servants, and lots of fun. But it can also be a hideous pain. Like when your Father orders you to marry a horrific war lord. That is why Paloma is running away-she doesn't know where she is going, or how she will get there, but she does know that she can't stay at home any longer. She has to get out of there. On her journey she meets another prince, also on the run. together, they have adventures, find a magical hidden paradise, and stumble upon a secret to large and stunning, neither of them could have ever imagined it. Can they keep their two kingdoms together and prevent a war? more importantly, can they get out of their arranged marriages so they can be together? 

Kaspar Kaspar Feb 01, 2011
Love it! I searched my name (paloma) and I found this. It's really, really, REALLY good! I hope one day this somehow gets published, because if it does, it'll be a bestsellser for sure.
TheAvidWriter TheAvidWriter Sep 24, 2010
love the cover!! u did a great job =) ill be replying to ur private message very shortly! =) love ya!
PlumBlossoms PlumBlossoms May 28, 2010
OMG how come I can never spell Kind with a G ??? I meant KINGGGGG Lol What is with me? I can spell pretty dang good and I can't even type KinGG? v.v; Haha
Katiebell Katiebell May 14, 2010
@PlumBlossoms THANKSSS!!!! I;d love to write more right now, but im tired and my hands are dead lols. off to bed for me! 
                              (Im so glad you like it! :D)
PlumBlossoms PlumBlossoms May 14, 2010
Awwwwwwwwwwww I really like thissss!!! REALLY I really do! 
                              I hope that kind isn't an old coot! v.v; Haha 
                              Coot.. hahaha.. sorry that's a funny word.. Lmao
Katiebell Katiebell May 14, 2010
@PlumBlossoms hehe this isnt the first chapter tho! its just a preview to see if ppls like it.  and i chose the name lothien cause it sounded medieval, and graceful, and that was the look i was going for with this horse and rider :)  about to start the first chapter yayy! :)