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Kay By FindingANewWayOut Updated Apr 08, 2011

Kat has moved from a small town in Montana to a huge city in California. She came with her producer Harry who is investing some of the money he inherited when his father and mother died in to a band that Kat is going to be singing in and their getting a huge break, they are going to be playing the sound trake to the a new movie thats just sarting up called "Summerset".

junebee junebee Apr 18, 2011
I really love this.  You're talented, your flow of writing with descriptions is obvious and profound.  Keep up the good work. :)
princessB1992 princessB1992 Apr 07, 2011
Very good!!!! I'll be sure to come back for more after work :)
MzzTykal MzzTykal Mar 24, 2011
I love how the first person point of view, tells the story like a diary entry. It's refreshing and playful. Good work. 
leannerosecooper leannerosecooper Mar 15, 2011
It was really good but you had quite a few errors, do you want me to edit your work for you? I can if you want but I don't have to (: 
                              I liked it muchly (Sorry I keep saying that word at the moment)
                              Voted, Leannee <3
thelionftw thelionftw Mar 11, 2011
It's a pretty good start. Just one sentence that could have been edited: Harry told me not to mention my name to anyone and if they ask tell them your fake name is Kat. There were few errors, but other than that it's pretty good.
shelbylw03 shelbylw03 Mar 09, 2011
Your a great writer seriously. So far its really good I didn't see any errors besides once or twice you didn't capitalize I but that was it and its not even that significant. It flowed well too. Voted and definitely going to keep reading.