The Witch Woman's Prophecy

The Witch Woman's Prophecy

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Anni Marjoram By AnniMarjoram Updated Oct 22

After Thamet is orphaned, he ventures out into a strange world of ancient relics where he has to discover the truth about himself and his family, while searching for a mysterious woman who haunts his dreams. 

This is a novel about loss, love and the search for freedom.

  • action
  • adventure
  • ancient
  • battle
  • bravery
  • desert
  • fantasy
  • multicultural
  • relics
  • ritual
  • romance
  • sci-fi
  • science-
  • science-fantasy
  • science-fiction
  • teen
  • thriller
  • wattys2018
  • youngadult
 #RebelBC Survivors' guilt... Is he still in physical pain? Maybe we should come back to that.
kpambroziak kpambroziak Oct 10
 #RebelBC I agree this is an interesting few lines because they say so much. But they seem more of a log line than an opening here.
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                              Great opening line. I love it when a book starts with a good, punchy life and death conflict. Excellent.
 #RebelBC Great opening line. I'm not sure about the italics though
kpambroziak kpambroziak Oct 10
 #RebelBC I'd go with the active here: The noise and flame would draw the bandits to the building ... 
                              
                              Comma needed after *dead bandit.
                              
                              You already mentioned something warm and sticky. Are you talking about blood? Maybe just be direct here.
 #RebelBC You can cut "so that he could no longer hold a sword in it."