Can April ever over come what happened to her when she was 12? It would help if an old love would stop chasing her. Can April ever love someone to make her truly happy again?
A good story line but needs to be fleshed out a bit with a bit more detail and filling in the gaps so it doesn't skip so much.
MY EYES. I'LL MAKE YOU PAY THE HOSPITAL BILLS IF I GET EVEN MORE INJURED THAN I ALREADY AM
@Surfsandpie no this isn't a really story. there is 26 other chapters. :)
Is this a true story??? It is so good!! Please write another chapter !!!!! I fanned you!!!!
Wow this sounds good. U should keep writing it. :) it captures my attention more than most of the books on here.
'He would also my teacher.' A few little mistakes like that.
All in all, work on keeping it smooth! :)