A Tearless World (Editing!)

A Tearless World (Editing!)

1.3K Reads 64 Votes 20 Part Story
SunsetDiamond By SunsetDiamond Completed

Ali has never seemed to fit in. Competing with a perfect brother and whinny sister as well as juggling school is not easy. So when she stumbles across a new world, she thinks it's a dream come true. But is there a dark secret is hidden beneath? And will she ever discover this worlds dark hidden secrets before it's too late? Read and find out!

SunsetDiamond SunsetDiamond Nov 02, 2012
@WeWriteRandomThings Thanks! I know Ali's got it bad at the moment. I'm glad you like it I hope you like the rest!
WeWriteRandomThings WeWriteRandomThings Nov 01, 2012
Oooooooo this so good, we feel so sorry for Ali, this is an awesome opening.... Voted x
SunsetDiamond SunsetDiamond Sep 04, 2012
@cassiebearxx Well you'll have to read to the end to make sure, lo. And yeah I know I tried to make J that kind of person so I'm glad you spotted it. I hope you like the rest! :)
SunsetDiamond SunsetDiamond Aug 07, 2012
@jwestbooks Wow thanks! I actually find openings the hardest so i'm really glad u like it! During the later chapters u find out why i called it a tearless world I'm glad ur looking forward 2 reading it and I hope u like it! :D
jwestbooks jwestbooks Aug 06, 2012
The title of your story is fantastic! It caught my attention as I was scrolling through the fantasy list. And I loved your opening paragraph. Nice job! I'm really looking forward to reading this :)
SunsetDiamond SunsetDiamond Apr 04, 2012
@Izanagi Oh yeah I completly missed that! Thanks and I hope u like the rest of it!