Thori Khatti Mithi Life {Comp...

By Taani10

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As some of you so badly want me to write about brothers so umm yes ... i have thought of writing... a new sto... More

Cover
character sketch
1.Meet the Goenka family
2.Senior K angry
3. Results are out
4. First Day in College
5.Addu hurt
6. Guilty kunj
7. Dont ever mess with a Goenka
8. Crush and Custard
9.Hospitalised Kiyaan
10. Broken Kunj
11. Why are you like this kunj
12. Prank went too far
13. Making it up
14. Aru in trouble
characters
15. Twinkle met the brothers
16. Trapped in problem
17.High voltage drama
18. Repentace
19. I dont deserve you
20. Forgive me
21. khanna's at Goenka Mansion
22.Healed
23. Stuck with each other
24. Punishment
25. A murderous Attack
26. sufferings
27. Relieved
28. Distant Memories
New cover
29. unexpected
30. Roka ceremony
31. Tom and Jerry
32. Dinner Disaster
Announcement
33. A shocking revealation
34. Emotions
35. Consequences
36. Stubborn Brothers
37. Nani's entry
38. Engagement (a)
39. Engagement (b)
40. Faith in God
41. Holi party
sidhant commented 😯😯😯💖💖
42. Bhang k side-effects
43. Slap...!
44. Forgotten Dreams
45. Clash between brothers
46. painful memories
47. Hurt
48. Reasons of Both the Brothers..
49. Trip to Mount Abu
50. " Bad Insticts OR Reality ?! "
51. Fear of Loosing Addu
52. Unheard cries
53. Who is to be Blamed?
54. Appology accepted
New Cover
55. Reviving best memories
56. Contrasting Memories
57. Dillusion....?
58. Understanding each other
59. Care
60. Blast from the Past
Anouncement
New Cover and a Teaser
61. Is it a Beginning of a Disaster ?
62. Seeds of Misunderstanding
63. Adverse Effects
Finally Wait is Over 💃😂
64. Intolerable
65. Unbreakable
66. Exploiting
67. Outburst of Aru
68. Worst Nightmare comes true
69. Consequences
70. Prayers to be answered
71. Guilt and Regrets
73. Lack of hope
74. Coldness in relationship
75. Something Treacherous
76. Terrible feeling
77. Exposed
78. Seperation
79. Unplanned Circumstances
80. Sorting it out
Epilogue

72. Breakdown

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By Taani10

Author's Note :- Before i start my story lets share my feeling First of all Happy Durga puja to u all... as i m a Bengali this is my festival.. in normal situation i would have been very busy these three days but as you know how the situations are due to this pendemic nothing is happening like before pujas are happening only for name sake... no masti no outing nothing..  n cherry on the cake is Rain.. weather is so rainny no one can came out of there houses to have darshan of maa..  m also sitting at home .. gazing at the clouds 😂 so this is how m celebrating my Durga puja... i posted today as i was free .. and i reallt like the fact when some peopl msg me n say that plz post wwe are waiting for your update only... i feel so gud that someone somewhere far away from me is waiting for my update itz a beautiful feeling so i have no other way then  celebrating my Puja.. rather than updating so here it is... and once again HAPPY ASHTAMI... sorry if u gyzz felt bored .. i jzz thought to share my feelings you peopl have become family to me....  love you all ..

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Scene starts ..

Ronita was fuming in anger the words of twinkl were echoing in her mind .

ronita - How dare you twinkle... ! tumhe mujhse is batsulukhi ki saza zarur milegi... zarur!!!

otherhand

Twinkl went to addus room to see him aru jzz gazing out of the window sadly ..

addy was caressing family pic of them the room which always used to fill with bickering n shouting was dull n lifeless fron these 7 months

twinkl was angry with them too but she cant even ignore the fact tgat how are they suffering the absenc of kunj had absured there life..

Twinkle entered... Aru n addu feeling someone's presenc they turned..

twinkl - Vo niche sab sath me bethk aj Lunch krenge  tumlogo bhi chalo..

addu shocked - Bhabhi?

twinkl - Kia hua...

aru - Hum niche?

twinkl sighs - Aj pura family sath me milke he

addu sadly - we cant bhabhi...  we cant go there... aj itne dino baad bhai ko niche laya gya h or humare jne se  sab barbaad hojaega....

twinkl - to kia puri zindgi apne bhai se bhagte rahoye chupte rahoge?

addu cried - Bhabhi hum maafi k layek ni h.... humne...  (cried) kitna kuch keh dia  tha meine bhai ko bhai ki jine ki khwaish he khtm higyi thi.... bhai ne humare liye mom dad se zid ki thi or tbhi vo bahar gye tha or humne sara ilzam bhai pe de dia....

aru - hums to is ghr me rehne ka bhi haq ni h us layek he ni h hum

twinkl with tears - Kash ye baat tum log wakt rehte smj jate ki tunhara bhai kbhi kuch glt kr he ni skta....  kash..

addu cried

twinkl went to him - lekin jab glty ki h saza to milegi na ..  tumlogo ne apne bhai ko tora h tumlog jor ni skte??

aru - hum bhai se nazre ni mila skte bhabhi plz

sanvi entered - milana hoga aru ..

they saw her

sanvi tensed - Tumlogo ko je kunj k pass jna hoga.... jo baate tir ki trh use chubhi h vo baate tumlogo ko he khtm krna h...  vo jis phase se guzar ra h usme agr use us shield se bahar ni nikala to kunj kbhi bhi life me normal ni hopayega....

twinkl cried - Agar had se zyada tumlogo se pyaar ni krta na to aj ye hlt ni hoty uski tumlogo me jan basty h uski.. or vo aj bhi basty h...  itna sabkuch hone k baad bhi..

sanvi - aru addu agr tumlog usse baat ni karoge use bologe ni ki u r guilty fr ur deeds .. wht kunj means to u... vo smjhega kese baccha

aru addu guiltu

addu - Agar ap keh re ho ki humare  presenc se bhai thik hosakte h to hum jaenge bhabhi... vo sab krenge jo krna zarury h.... bhai ko thik krne k liye hum kuch bhi krenge....   kuch bhi....

twinkl - Is baar addu. tumjare bhai bht buri trh se tutr h mujje ni pta kunj ko jo zakhm tum dono ne diye h vo kbhi bhar bhi payega ya ni... lekin i would beg of u future me or use kbhi glty se bhi ye sab mt kehna warna vo shyed wohe dam tordega....

addu clutch her hand gasping - no no bhabhi ...  bhai humari bhi jaan h humse galty hogyi gunah hogya h ..  pr hum ye kbhi repeat ni krenge kabhi ni .. i know itz not easy to beleive that...  par bhabhi hum behek gye tha...  vo humare liye humare papa tha... or vo jo bhi keh re tha humne vo sab man lia ...

sanvi - Hume justification mat do addu.. galat tumne humare sath ni kia galat tum ne apne bhaiyo k sath kia h kunj or kiyaan k sath kia h... or khaskar kunj k sath tumhe use manana h hume ni...

otherhand

Kunj was sitting in his dining table after so long..

sumi akhilesh wanted to shower him with all the love and happiness  but kunj was remain unreactive ... he was just like a lifeless soul who have no emotions... 

sumi - baccha chalo ye soup pi lo...  tumhe jaldi jaldi thik bhi to homa h na fr bari maa tumhare liye tumhara favourite  khana bna dengi 

kunj remain unreactive which hurted sumi and Akhilesh... kiyaan too

Nani - Sumi... kunj ko tum apne hatho se kyu ni khilaty...  ab vo agr is gandi nani ka dil rkh skta h to bari maa to uski maa h vo uska dil kese dukhayega...

kiyaan sadly - Ha maa.. kunj is not being himself us accident ka us trauma ka usk dil o Dimag me itna gehra asar para h ki usne react krna he bnd krdiya h  ab bas humara pyaar he h jo use wapas normal life me wapas laa skta h..

sumi nodded with tears she took the bowl and put the spoon near his lips - Baccha chalo muh kholo... aj bari maa he khilayegi...  apne kunj ko..

slowly kunj open his mouth.. n sumi was in tears but a bit happy that she can able to feed kunj... 

After few bites... 

twinkl n sanvi came with Aru addu...

kiyaan shock to see them n bit tensed n about to say something.. sanvi eyed him..

sumi n akhilesh also tensed to see them cz they know he might react badly but it wss necessary

twinkl went to kunj with a smile - Kunj.... kunj dekho tumse milne kon aya h...  ek bar miloge ni unse?

kunj quiet..

aru addu witj tears brimming eyes went near kunj the brother who used to love him adore him like anything ... whose hug was the most magical feeling in the world was so dull today..

addu n aru sat near him with shaky voice - B..bhai?

kunj quiet

Aru n addu hold his hand.. clutch it

addu with tears - Bhai... dekho na ekbar humari trf... plz dekh lo

aru - Bhai we r sorry bhai..  we r really sorry....

there crying was making him bit restless...  the visuals of past come across his mind

Addu cried - Bhai sabse zyada meine apko takliff di h meine apka dil dukhata h tora h... apko jo saza deni h de do par ese chup mat raho...

aru - ha bhai... ap jo bolenge hum wo krenge pr plz chup mt reh...

kunj started taking heavy breathes he stood up immidiately

kiyaan worried - Kunj??

addu tensed - Bhai..

kunj removed the grip of Aru addu - no no no...  m..meine meri wjh se sab hua h.. i m responsibl for everything ...  mom dad.. mom dad mar gye meri ejh se

all shocked to see his site

addu - Bhai

kunj jzz step back.. he dont want addu to touch him...

kiyaan went to him - kunj kunj esa kuch ni h ok

addu cried - ha bhai u r not responsible for anything ..

kunj was not ready to listen to anyone he jzz rushed to his room

kiyaan tensed - KUNJJ...  shit

addu n aru cried

kiyaan jsz look at addu aru  as a bro he can feel there pain too but kunjs condition was unbearable for him .. 

sanvi - kiyaan

kiyaan - dekha sanvi i told u inko abhi kunj k smne lana

sanvi - hum galat ni tha kiyaan see kunj ne react to kia...   addu aru ki wjh se... unhi ki baato se vo tuta tha to react bhi wohe karwa paye

addu guilty - dadu..  hum ni ana chahte tha par bhabhi ne  kha bhai ko...

kiyaan jzz look away cz he was himself going through w terribl situation ..

aru - dadu ... hum jnte h humne bhai ko bht tkliff de di.. hum bas unhe us takliff se niklna chahte tha sanvi bhabhi ne bola ki itz very imp to mk him react tbhi hum aye warna hum bhai ko apni shakal bhi ni dikhane chahte tha

kiyaan with tears - meine kbhi sapne me bhi ni socha tha ki mujhe esa ek din dekhna parega jha tum dono ko kunj se dur rehna hoga tum dono ko dekh k kunj ki buri yaade taza hojaengi...

aru addu cried - we r sry dadu... dadu plz

kiyaan jzz left from there..

otherhand

kunj was covering his ears those elligatiion was roaming in his mind...

kunj - plz stop plz plz

twinkl rush to him - Kunj...

kunj wss shivering n panicking - meine mara? meine..?? meri wjh se sab hua h meri wjh se

twinkl cried - nhi kunj nhi.. tumhari wjh se kuch ni hua h

kunj clutch her hand n cried - meri wjh se sab hua h meri wjh se ...  mom dad mar gya...  *Twinkle*

twinkl gasped n suprised after so long she is hearing her name from his mouth... n it feels so gud

twinkl with tears - Kunj

kunj cried n hug her while twinkle jzz hug him tightly

kunj - sab meri wjh se hua h.   meri wjh se  h na...

twinkl cub his face n kissed it - Kuch ni hua h tumhari wjh se vo srf ek accident tha.. 

kiyaan was near door he was bit happy that atleast kunj n. twinkl were talking atleast kunj was reacting to her... 

sanvi with tears - Kunj dhire dhire he sahi but react kr ra h ...

kiyaan - pr us raat ka bht gehra asar hua h sanvi .. vo br br srf khudko blame kr ra h

sanvi sadly - Aru addu k blame ko vo bhula ni paa ra but dont wry hum use itna pyar denge ki vo is zakhm se bhi ubhar ayega dekh lena

kiyaan sadly - Or aru addu ..?? kia kunj kbhi unk sath normal hopayega

sanvi stiffs cz itz really difficult to say...

scene starts it was late at night...  

Kunj was sleeping in his room..  kiyaan was also there...  as after that accident kiyaan was stayinh with kunj only

slowly the door of the room gets open...

Addu entered inside as he knew now adays he cant meet kunj cz kunj gets the wounds which he has given to him becomes fresh in his mind....  so he sometimes at midnight come to meet as due to high dosage of medicin kunj stays in deep sleep

Addu slowly sat beside him n caress his head and hold his hands those hands who had always been there to love him pamper him...

Addu with tears - M sorry bhai m really sorry... meine apk sath jo kia h na vo koi paraya bhi na kre.... ap itna pyaar krte tha hume... humari har galty ko maaf krdete tha humari khushi k liye sabse lad jate tha or meine kia kya? sab sab khtm krdia....  jo hath mere upr ek strong shield ki trh use khudse  dur krdia... 

addu sobbed but silently so that it shouldnt break anyone's sleep.. kiyaan was sleeping turning other side of kunj  so addu didn't see whether his sleep broke or not but in reality kiyaans sleep already broke the moment he entered .. but he was quiet controlling his own tears

addu - bhai me janta hu meine jo kia h usk liye koi maafi ni h me maafi deserv bhi ni krta..   but fr bhi agar ap kbhi ap mujhe maaf kar pao to i promise i seriously me dubara kbhi kbhi kbhi apko hurt ni krunga kbhi ni...  ap jo bolenge jese bolenge me wese he rahunga...  me kbhi kisi trip pe ni jaunga kbhi car drive krne ki zid ni karunga kbhi apse jhut ni bolunga .. kbhi ni....

addu cried n hiccupped - Bhai apko pta h apke hina humari life bht andheri hogyi h....  ap or dadu jab hume protect krk rkhte tha tab to hum kbhi smjhe  ni or aj jb ap dono ka saya uth gya h na to sachme khudko Anath feel krta hu

kiyaan clutch his bedsheets when he heard that... 

addu sadly with tears - Bhai mujhe ni pta apke bina me kb tk ji paunga...  mei to god se humesha pray krta hu ki kash mujhe maut he aa jay .... cz ye jo saza  mil ri h na bhai ye maut se bhi battar h mere liye ap jo humse baat ni krte humari trf dkhte ni.. pichle 7 mahine se to ap hosh me he ni tha or aj jb ho to bhi ap humse baat ni krna chahte humari presenc apko tkliff dety h.. apke zakhmo  ko kuredty h n it kills me... kyuki meine he to diye h vo zakhm.... kbhi kbhi to ye feeling aty h ki khudko khtam kar du ....  but then mujhe pta h agar meine esa koi step lia to ap or zyada bikhar jaoge or shyed khudko blame krne lagoge.. afterall u love me still...  i know... 

addu kissed his head - Bhai i just wanted to tell u that ki i love u.... i really love u....  apka ye bhai duniya ka sabse bura bhai h i know but still i love u....

with that Addu jzz left from there while kiyaan jzz remain in tears each words of addu made him flinch.... 

Addu was in terrise crying cuddling himself helpless... n hiccupping ...

addu cried n thinks - plz ppz bhagwanji.... mere kiye ki saza mere bhai ko mat do... plz...  jo kuch bhi meine kia h usme glty meri h .... aru se bhi ztada glty meri h ..  mujhe saza do mujhe tkliff do kyy mere bhai ko de re ho ap to ache logo k sath kbhi bura ni krte na to kyu mere kiye ki saza pure family ko mil ri h....

that time a hand caress his head he look up to see itz kiyaan

Addu shocked n immidiately weep his tears - d..dadu....

kiyaan - Yha kyu betha h ese... mausam kharab h kbhi bhi tufaan aa skta h

addu - me vo me...  (teary eyes trying to hide)

Kiyaan cub his face - Mujhse apne ansu chupane ki zarurt ni h itna bhi bara ni hua h.... ki apne dadu se ansu chupaye...

addu cried his heart out hugging  him kiyaan jzz rub his back - bss bas ssh sshh

addu cried - Meine kitna galat krdia dadu.... u hate me na....  

kiyaan broke the hug - kbhi kbhi to itni mature baate krta h to kbhi kbhi kia hojata h tujhe? tujhe kgta h me tujhe hate kr skta hu??

Addu look dwn - u should hate me dadu i deserv it...

kiyaan - Yes u did wrong infct u did a blunder jisk liye me bht naraz hu bht gussa hu tujhse....  lekin nfrt ni kr sakta kbhi ni kr skta

addu cried - Bhai ki ye halat mujhse dekhi ni jaa ri dadu ni bardash ho ra mujhse vo mujhpe gussa kyu ni krte mujhe marte kyu ni...

kiyaan with tears - Tera bhai to esa he tha na humesha se vo na to dusro ko hurt krta h na he takliff khud he apne andar sari tkliff daba k beth jata h... 

kiyaan - Or kia bol ra tha tu vo sab haan?

addu shock - Ap.. ne sunlia

kiyaan - Haa..!! or agar kunj ne sun lia hota na to vo or bhi hurt hota. ..  ese kese keh skta h tu ...

addu cried - dadu plz bhai ko thik krdo na..  plz

kiyaan cub his face - Vo thik hoga bacche ... medicins km krne lgi h dhire dhire vo respond bhi krne lga h... twinkl ko pehchan gya vo...  mom ki baat bhi suni.. or tum dono ko dkh k the way he reacted itz a good sign baccha...

addu clutch his hand - Ap sahi keh re ho na dadu bhai normal hojaenge na

kiyaan - It will take a lil time but he will...  or abhi use esa lg ra h jese kisiko uski zarurt ni h specially vo sab incidents jo us Raghav k ane k baad se hua h vo sab usk dimag se ni nikli h

addu with tears - he didnt forget the words i have said to him...  

kiyaan - Kunj dhire dhire normal zarur hoga par ha me ye ni bata skta ki sabkuch phle jese hojaega ... kyuki vo asan ni h bilkul bhi ni

addu nodded with tears - Vo bas thik hojay bhai or kuch ni chahiye...me puri zindgi unse maafi mngta rahunga dadu... 

kiyaan was in tears he can see the repentance of addu but wht can he do the damage is too much

Next few days passed.  

kunj was slowly slowly responding to everyone but still not much.... most comfrtbl with kiyaan twinkle n somewhst with sanvi....  he never stop sumi or akhilesh from doing anything if they wants to feed him or talk to him but he never responded much ..

One fine day

Sanvi was checking on him..  kiyaan n twinkl stood tensed while kunj was quite as usual b

sanvi smile - Kunj... tum bht progress kar re ho.... bas ek he shikayat h ... why dont u talk with everyone hmm..  sab tumse baat krna chahte h na...

sumi entered - Yahi na beta

sumi sat near him with a plate of food

sumi with tears - Kabse isk muh se bari maa sunna chahty hu...  but ye h ki ...  baat he ni krna chahta  bari maa se pyaar ni krta na ye.  

kiyaan sighs - Mumma esa ni h ..

sumi - tu chup reh kiyaan... sab smjty hu me ..  srf tuhi imp  h isk liye ... bari maa ni

kunj eyes brimmed with teaes he wanted to speak but he jzz dont feel like speaking..

but tear drop fell in her hand

sumi gasped n turned to see kunj in tears

sumi cub his face - Kunj... baccha tumhari ankho me ansu kyu

twinkl - Ap ki baate use aj bhi utna he effct krty h bari maa... 

sanvi - Ha tbhi to dekhiye kese ro diya.. ye . 

sumi jzz cried n hug him - Are mere bacche me to ese he bol ri thi  me jnty ni kia mera kunj mujhse kitna pyaar krta h sabse zyada krta h... h na? 

Kunj was in tears he was going through a emotional phase he dont want to talk but even a small thing matters to him

Kunj sobbed in her embrace while sumi jzz hug him..

kiyaan smiled with tears 

sumi -Acha bas ab.... me to isk liye khana layi thi... lo me he khila dety hu

sumi smiled and started feeding him 

After all this she left...

Twinkl sat beside kunj ..

sanvi - Kiyaan hume chlna chahiye...  

kiyaan tense - Par kunj

sanvi eyed him - Are kiyaan bhul gye hume aj hospital bhi to jna h na... n twinkl h na

twinkl sighs - Ha kiyaan tum ja skte ho me hu kunj k sath...

kiyaan understood n left giving them time

twinkl smile n hold his hand - Kunj ...

kunj quiet

twinkl - Acha kab tak ese chup rahoge baat ni karoge hmm?? tumhe ni lgta this behaviour hurts us..

kunj was still not ready to talk much

twinkl - Kunj me hu tumhare sath...  or me tumhara sath kbhi ni chorungi.. kbhi ni..

kunj look at her

twinkl - do u trust me??

kunj nodded in yes

twinkl smiled n held his other hand - To bas yaad rkhna ki tumhari twinkl tumhara sath kbhi ni choregi.. kbhi bhi ni... 

kunj hug her while twinkle smiled

otherhand

Kiyaan was sitting in his room tensed - Itne din hogye kunj zyada kuch bolta he ni

sanvi - kiyaan use Acute clinical depression h jiske side effects kitne criticsl hote h tumhe pta h .  hum isiliye to dar re tha na n hume esa he kuch expect bhi kr re tha

kiyaan cried - lekin kab tk sanvi.. kb tk vo ese chup rahega

sanvi - kiyaan usk andar bht sara dard h vo kahi na kahi dar ra h vo wapas se us pain se ni guzarna chahta... n isiliye usne apne irdh gidh ek shield bna li h ... jisk bahar vo niklna ni chahta ..

kiyaan helples - or kitne din sanvi or kitne din ... taras gya hu mere purabe bhai ko dkhne k liye

sanvi - Kiyaan i m telling u vo is chiz se bahar niklega symptoms bhi ache h...  but .

kiyaan tensed - But??

sanvi sighs - Jis trh se vo tuta h na m not sure ki uski baatr wapas ane k baad bhi vo....phle jesa rahega...  we can se a new kunj ... kyyki ese cases me esa hota h patient khudko puri trh se badal dete h... kunj ki baate wapas zarur ayengi vo normal zindgi bhi jiyega lekin jo kunj vo pehle hua krta tha m not sure ki vo ab bhi rahega..

that time they heard a something fall...

kiyaan n sanvi turn to see aru there n he heard everything.. n phone fell from his hand..

kiyaan shocked - Aru..

Aru jzz pick up his phone n left ..

kiyaan tensed - Shit...

sanvi - kiyaan

kiyaan cried - Ye ni hona tha sanvi...  ek trf kunj h or dusri trf aru addu me ni dekh paa ra in sab ko ese ... addu kitna tut gya h me tumhe smjha bhi ni skta...  sab kuch bikhar gya h sanvi sab kuch

sanvi sat beside kiyaan who was crying seeing his brother vulnurable each and every day was killing him 

sanvi - Kiyaan plz sambhalo khudko ese to tum khud bhi bimar par jaoge  tumhe bhi to smbjlna h na

kiyaan cried - Sambhal he to raha hu khudko sanvi itne dino se ab or ni ho ra esa lg ra h jese bht buri trh se har ra hu..

sanvi - Sshhh mera kiyaan kbhi ni har skta ... usne jb kuch thana h krk dikhaya n agr vo chahe to in bikhre huye rishto ko bhi  vo hi sametega...

ronita who heaed all this smirk n thinks - Esa to kbhi hone se raha kyuki esa me kbhi hone he ni dungi... ye char bhai jb tk ese bikhre rahenge tb tk mere liye acha h... kyuki pichle kuch mahino me meine jitne bhi paise apne acount pr transfer liye h vo Isiliye hopaya h kyuki koi business me thik se man he ni h ... or kiyaan jisko sabse zyada shak mujhpe hota h vo to khud hosh me ni h..  bhaiyo ki jhnjhat me or ye jhnjhat he kam ayega ese kr krk ek din me ye puri jaydad apne naam karwa dungi... 

ronita smirk thinking about her evil motive not knowing wht future awaits fr her.

otherhand

Aru cried in his room addu came to him

addu tensed - Aru.. kia hua. .  tu ro kyu ra h.. bhai.. bhai thik to h ? unki tbyt kuch?

Aru - unki tbyt jesi thi wesi he h ...

addu - to phir?

aru composing himself - Aj meine dadu or sanvi bhabhi ki baat suni vo log keh re tha ki bhai jab thik hojaenge usk baad bhi they cant guarantee ki vo purane bhai rahenge ya ni.. bhai might change himself completely ...

addu shocked

aru with tears - Humne humare bhai ko kho dia addu...  humne socha tha na ki shayed ek din esa ayega bhai hume maaf krdenge ...  but shyed esa ni hoga

addu stood numb in tears..

Next day..

Akhilesh was holding kunj n mking him out of the room cz now a day they do this sumi akhilesh or kiyaan bring kunj out of the room talk with him.. chat with him hoping he would respons there talk he will remain shut n like a lifeless machine he would  do everything they want but no will was present in him..

akhilesh -  kunj tumhe pta h humara busines kbse wait kr ra h usk boss ki pura staff wait kr ra h kb kunj sir ayenge unki pyari si smile denge n sare problems solv krdenge...

kunj still quiet akhilesh felt so bad to see his son like this kunj was no less than a son to him... he loves kunj more than kiyaan ... n today seeing him like this .. made him feel vulnurable...

kunj was walking suddenly he stumbled n about to fall...

akhilesh shouted - Kunj ..

but addu came at the nick of time n hold him... 

addu tensed - Bhai..

kunj look at him he was actually seeing him after many days cz addu tries not to come near him to hyper him

kunj look at him and his heart feel numb... addu looks so pale.. so dull one part of him had noticed this changes in him.. n jzz want to hug him tight...  but other half was lifeless.

Aru also came ...

kunj saw him too both aru addu were looking at kunj with tears... they wanted to say so many things to kunj but they were quiet ..

kunj wanted to hold his babies whom he loved so much but suddenly his head reminded  those words of Addu

*U killed our parents*

*Apka pyaar to natak tha apni glty chupane ka*

kunj step back . n jzz rush back to his room...

Aru n addu cried

akhilesh went to them - Aru addu...

addu weeping his tears - We r fine bare papa... ap plz bhai k pas raho bhai k sath raho unhe zarurat h apki... 

akhilesh caress there head n left

aru - bhai aj bhi un zakhmo ko ni bhule humari baato ko ni bhule tbhi to hume dekh k ese react krte h..

addu - tbhi to unk samne ni ataa.. br br unhe tkliff ni dena chahta .. jb hume dekh k unhe itni tkliff hoty h

aru - or abhi bhi bhai thik ni huye zyada hyper hogye to tbyt bigar jaegi...  b

ronita smirk n thinks - Agr kunj k samne  me uska past utha k wapas rkh du to kunj frse bimar par jaega ya fr kia pta mar he jay...  isse to mera he kam asan hoga...  hmm mujhw he kuch krna parega.... 

with that she smirk n left ..

Kunj was in his room sitting clutching his bedsheets the incident of the past and those harshful words of Aru Addu came in his mind... and everytime he feels like he is responsible for everything

Akhilesh entered n went towards kunj - Kunj.. beta kia hua

kunj was jzz taking deep breaths..

akhilesh can sens he was not in peace ... he was disturbed

Akhilesh rub his hand - Kunj... kia hua beta.  

kunj murmurs - Mom dad mar gye m..meri wjh se ..

akhilesh shocked tensed again he was saying all this 

Akhilesh - kunj!!! nhi bacche esa kuch ni h

Kiyaan entered n tensed to see kunj like this

kiyaan went to him n cub his face - Kunj.. kunj kia hua

Akhilesh tens - Vo aru addu ko dekh k pta ni bht restless hogya..

kiyaan understood n jzz hug him - Kunj kunj itz ok ssshh teri wjh se kbhi kuch ni hua kuch bhi ni

kunj jzz quiet slowly he calmed a. bit ..

kiyaan gave him medicin and he had those...

akhilesg - Acha hua beta tum aa gye me to ghbra he gya tha

kiyaan - Papa abhi vo thik h ... ap jaiye me hu yha pe...

Akhilesh nodded n left... 

kiyaan sighs n sat - So..  Kunj... meine kuch decide kia h...  kitne din hogye na hum kahi bahar ni gye to wht about hum kal bahar chle tu me sanvi or twinkle....  liks old times... hum bht masti krenge 

kunj was quite n numb.. kiyaan was helpless

kiyaan - bht sata ra h tu tujhe pta h .. test le ra h na mera.. me bht pareshn krta tha na tujhe? to ab tu ese pareshn kr re h...  acha mujhe bhi to mera vo bhai chahiye jo mujhe dant ta tha mera kheyal rkhta tha meri har choti si choti chiz bina kahe use ota chlty thi... kb milega mujje vo? hmm??

kunj wss quite still kiysan jzz hug him tears roll out his eyes

kiyaan - tu ziddi h to me bhi kuch kam ni hi tujhe me apna purana bhai bnak rahunga... 

while seems like no effect of his word

ronita who heard all this smirk n thinks - Me banne du tab na ...   

time passes a bit

Kiyaan was feeding kunj soup...

kiyaan then gave him medicin

kiyaan smiled  n thinks - Aj ye last course h medicin kal se new medicin start hongi... n doc ne kha h isee recovery or thora speedily hongi ho sakta h jo emotional outburst usk dil me daba h vo break out hojay ...  n vo is trauma se bahar aa jay

After having medicin ..

Kiyaan - Kunj chal abhi so jaa  thora better feel karega...

kunj lie down  while kiyaan was caressing his head trying to make him sleep

that time kiyaan got a call from hospital..

Kiyaan - yes??

kiyaan tens - Abhi ana hoga?? umm okay..

kiyaan sighs therez a case n he need to go ..

kiyaan was about to go kunj hold his hand..

kiyaan turned ..  - kunj?

kunj jzz clutch his hand kiyaan sat beside him - Kiaa baat h kunj.. kuch chahiye??

kunj jzz nodded in no n keep on clutching his hand 

kiyaan - Kunj mujhe abhi thori der k liye hospital jna hoga me maa ko bol ra hu she will stay with u or bas me jldi se kam niptak aa jaunga

kunj nodded in no he jzz want kiyaan to stay with him.. he was emotionally broken n just cant trust anyone more than kiyaan

kunj with tears - p.. plz stay.. 

Thtz it kiyaan cant deny his brother plead and for the first time kunj had said something like this to him .

kiyaan weep his tears n hug him - ssshh m here..

kiyaan called  in hospital - ajk liye us patient ko Dr.bakshi k under rkh do me unse baat krlunga bki me kal ake dekhta hu...

they nodded n cuts thr call..

kiyaan smiled - bas happy? ni jaa ra me??

Kunj sigh n keep on clutching his hand he need kiyaan so badly now adays kiyaan is like his life support system

kiyaan - jab mera bhai ni chahta me kese jaa skta hu hmm? chal ab so jaa. .. m here only

kiyaan lied him down n kunj slowly fell asleep

kiyaan with teary thinkd - me tujhe itna vulnurabl dekhunga kbhi socha he ni tha... jo bhai mujhe khud khta tha ki tu jaa patients sambhal me hu na aj wohi mere bina... (closing his eyes) 

kiyaan kissed his head n caress him slowly he too fell asleep....

next day early morning

Kiyaan woke up with phn rings

kiyaan - hello

staff - Sir vo patient ki halat bht kharab ho ri h n patient party apk ilawa kisi aur doc se treat ni karans chahte.. 

(Sometimes it happens the patient party trust one doc n no matter wht they wwnt hin to treat this typ of trust comes with doctors performance n track record which kiyaan clearly has)

staff - sir pls aap aa jaiye

kiyaan - Shit ! 

he look at kunj who was in deep sleep

kiyaan sighs - me me ata hu abhi..

saying he left covering kunj... n rushed to hospital....

Ronita jsz woke up to fill water from kitchen n saw kiyaan rushing out ..

ronita - ye itni subah kaha jaa ra h.  

kiyaan in call - Ha ha OT ready kari me aa ra hu .

ronita - ohh hospital..?? to mtlb apne pyare bhai ko akela chorke jaa ra h ... chalo acha h.   aj me bhi thora apne pyare bhatije se baat krlungi ajkl mujhe milne kha diya jaata h apnr bhatije se... vo bhi apni pyaari bua ko miss kar ra hoga...

ronita smirk n left...

Time passes a bit... kunj open his eyes slowly he look arround to find kiyaan but the room wss empty .. he didnt react much as  kiyaan doesn't present in the room all the time so he wss quitr used to it... 

Ronita entered - Good morning kunj beta .

kunj look up to see ronita

ronita  smile n sat beside him - Are baccha kesi tbyt h tunhari ab.. pta h me kitna pareshn rehty thi tumhare liye??

kunj quite he looked here n there to find kiyaan ..

ronita - Kise dhund re ho beta kiyaan ko?? vo to ghar pe ni h bahar gya h ..

kunj shock

ronita -  kia hua tumje batak ni gya? vo

kunj quite

ronita - Hmm ab kia kare .  hoga kuch kam use wese bhi sab kuch chor charke tumhare sath bhi to ni beth skta na.  .

kunj quiet

ronita with fake tears -  beta me tumhara dard smj skty hu kitna dukh hua hoga tumhe  jab tumhare APNE BHAI NE TUJHE UNK MAA BAAP KA MARNE KA ILZAM LAGA DIA.

kunj gasped the memory started haunting him again

ronita - Ab kise pta tha vo behrupiya niklega n aru addu unhone bhi to trust ni kia tumpr.. ..

kunj clutch bedsheets this talks were disturbing him

ronita - beta kia kuch ni kia tumne un dono k liye or unhone tunhe bol dia ki tumne APNE PARENTS KO MARDALA??

she was deliberately saying this point to instigt him to make his health detoriates

ronita - Par chahe vo log mane na mane is ghr me bki log bharosa krte h.  beta.. tumharu wjh se ni mare bhaia bhbhi ...  bikiuk ni mare .. to kia hua aru addu ko is baat pe yakin na ho.  .

kunj shivered the thought flinched him . and ronita smirk n left

kunj shocked numb aru addu thinks he is responsible fr parents death jzz killing him n those incidents were killing him

kunj shockrf numb - S..sab meri wjh se aru addu bhi yhi sochte h meine mara h mumma papa ko meri wjh se meri wjh se mar gye ..

kunj gasped.   he feels suffocated n jzs walk out of the room not caring about anything...

Time passes a bit

sumi enterrd in kunj room to see empty

sumi - Are kunj kiyaan dono he ni h room me

sumi look here n there but didnt find them ..

sumi - Are kha gyr .. kiyaan khi kunj ko bahar to ni le gya??

sumi called kiyaan who jsz came out if the OT

Kiyaan - ha mumma kunj uth gya kia.. me bas thori der me aa ra hu

sumi tens - Kunj uth gya mtlb?? vo tumhare sath ni h

kiyasn shock - maa me hospital me hu mere sath kyu hoga!! vo to ghr pe h na so ra tha me to subh subh aya hu fr an emergncy case

sumi - what!!! but kiyaan vo ghr pe ni h

kiyaan shocked - WHATTT

kiyaan panicked - Mom ap ye kia bol ri h apko pta h na kunj ki condition apko lgta h vo is halat me kahi jaa skta h??

sumi tensed - Tabhi to beta meinr socha shyed tum use bahar leke gye ho walk pe ya kuch

kiyaan freak out - Shit mummaa .. no!!! goddd.. okay me m e bas ata hu..

sanvi came n tensed - Kiyaan ... kiyaan kia hua

kiyaan panicking - Sanvi vo kunj... kunj ghar pe ni h pta ni khi chla gya h

sanvi shocked - what!!! Apne is halat me kaha gya hoga vo

kiyaan - sanvi aj early morning mujhe call aya ki ek emergncy h n i had to come mei kisi ko infrm krk bhi jaa ni paya mujhe lga mom to subah uthk he kunj k room me jaengi n tb tk Meri OT bhi khatam hojaegi ab mom keh ri h vi ghr pe ni h n esa kbhu ni hua phle ki kunj ese bina bataye chla jay vo room me he rehta tha bhale  he me usk sath na rahu aj achank kese

sanvi - Dont wry kiyaan mil jaega vo kha jaega .. zyada dur ni gya hoga... chlo

sanvi - or me twinkl ko bhi infrm kr ri hu

kiyaan nodded 

While on the otherhand twinkk was almost ready to go to Goenka mansion to meet kunj.. tht time she gers call of sanvi

twinkl - Ha sanvi bolo ... WHATTTTTT

scene changes to goenka mansion

Aru n addu jzz came bck from college n saw suni akhilesh tensed

aru - bari maa .. bari maa wht hppnd

sumi crying addu feared of kunj's health

addu panicked - bari maa..  kia hya bari maa bhai thik h?? kia hua batao na

akhilesh tens - kunj ka subah se kuch pta ni chal ra .... sanvi kiyaan twinkl  dhundne gyw

aru n addu shocked - WHATTTT bhai is halat me kaha gye honge..

sumi cried - vo he to smj ni ara

ronita smirk n thinks - agar mujhe pta hota ki meri baato se he kam hojaega to me itna dimag lgak planing ni kr ri hoty... meine to socha tha insab baati se kunj ki tbyt bigregi or kia pta frse coma me chla jay...  pr ye to usse bhi zyada acha hua kunj ghr he chork chla gya....  bhgwn kre ki mile he na...

otherhand

kiyaan sanvi twinkl trying to find kunj in every possible way..

twinkl crying - ese kesw kahi jaa skta h vo

kiyaan - sab meri glty h kash me kisiko bata aa pata.   meine socha he ni vo bina batate chla jaega

sanvi - kiyaan vo ja kha sakta h abhi tk to uski mental state stbl ni hui h kha gya hoga .... 

kiyaan - vo he to smj ni aa ra..... 

otherhand

kunj was standing near Arun n kavya's memorial...

Kunj cried n sat near the graviard - Mumma papa k sorry...  m so sorry.  ...  ni jina chahta me.... ni jina chahta.... sab sab mujhe katil smjte h..  meri wjh se he ap... (cried) aru addu ne bhi kwh dia ki unhe meri koi zarurt ni h ...  vo khte h ki itne saalo tak meine srf pyaar ka dhong kia kbhi pyaar ni kia ....

(he was letting out all those thing which addu aru had said to him when raghav told them about accdnt)

kunj cried - Me ni bardash kar paa ra mumma papa...

he caress kavyas graviard - m..mumma ap to jnty ho na ap he mere luye mumma thi meine kbhi apko... (he cried)

otherhand

kiyaan - Gyzz kahi vo chote papa or choti maa k graviard k yha to ni gya....

sanvi - itz possible ..  kyuki usk dimg me to yhi chal ra h na... ho sakta h vo hi gya ho ..

twinkl - ha ha chlo wohe chalte h 

they rushed there and the site they saw made then shocked ... kunj was crying his heart out....  sitting there

twinkl shock n rush to him followed by kiyaan n sanvi

twinkl clutch him - Kunj.. kunj kia hua

kunj crying - m responsibl for everything aj meri wjh se mere mom dad is duniya me ni h .... is bojh k sath me ni ji skta

kiyaan - Kunj shut up esa kuch bhi ni h  kuch bhi ni h kyu ni smjta tu

kunj shouted - ESA HE H... ESA HE H... MERI WJH SE SAB KUCH HUA H YAHI SACH H...

kiyaan sanvi shock twinkl too because kunj was finally reacting in such a way ..

kunj cried - meine mara h meri wjh se mar gyw vo agr me vo zid ni krta to aj mom dad zinda hote..  aru addu anath ni hote... me me bht bura hu i m a WORST SON..

Twinkl cried - nhi kunj esa kuch bhi ni h...  tum tab kitne chote tha or vo zid tumne aru addu k liye kia tha apne liye ni...   to how can u be responsible

kunj - no no no no... sab meri wjh se he hua h.. me he responsibl hu.  .. me.. mujhe zinda rehne ka koi haq ni h...   mujhe to mar jna chahiye... 

kiyaan angrily  - kunj.. kunj shut up... ek or bar tune ye bola na to mujhse bura kki ni hoga.... 

kunj step back  n cried..

kiyaan hold him - kunj tu ni h responsibl yr koi ni manta tujhe responsible... 

kunj cried n pleaded - me ni chahta tha me ni chahta tha kiyaan ki mom dad... kiyaan meine ni mara me ni chahta tha esa kuch ho tu to beleive krta h na....  me ni

kiyaan with tears jzz nodding his head - Ha kunj me ..  me jnta hu

kunj cried - me ni chahta tha esa kuch ho...  me ni....  (and suddenly kunj fell down unconsious)

Scaring the hell out if them

they shouted horrified - KUNJJJJJJ...

precap :-  Will it detoriates kunj health more... ??

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