Naruto x Male Reader (Revampe...

By Electrivire56

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Y/n is part of the Uzumaki clan that means he has red hair, that's something to know about his child hood I g... More

Prologue
Chapter 1: The Beginning Of A Tale
Chapter 2: Squad Introduction
Chapter 3: Basic Chakra Control
Chapter 4: First Mission
Chapter 5: Boulders
Chapter 6: There Were Two
Chapter 7: Interferences
Chapter 8: Captured
Chapter 9: The Rescue
Chapter 10: The Captured Anbu
Chapter 11: Chunin Exams
Chapter 12: Test For Entry!
Chapter 13: The Test and Exams Commence
Chapter 14: Squad Eight and The Chunin Exams
Chapter 15: Team Eight vs Chunin level ninja
Chapter 16: Lee's determination
Chapter 17: Escaping The Forest!
Chapter 18: Battle Part
Chapter 19: Preliminary Continues!
Chapter 20: The Hyuga family conflict!
Chapter 21: The Last Two Fighters!
Chapter 22: Master Nature User!
Chapter 23: Water Chakra Control
Chapter 25: The Beast Inside
Chapter 26 (S2): Hospital attack!
Chapter 27: Chunin Exams
Chapter 28: Konoha invasion Pt.1
Chapter 29: Konoha invasion Pt.2
Chapter 30: Limitations between dark and light!
Chapter 31: The Secret
Chapter 32: The Hokage's secret Jutsu!
Chapter 33: Mastered it his way!
Chapter 35 (S3): C Rank Mission Team 8
Chapter 36: Journey to the Land of Stone
Chapter 37: Land Of Stone
Chapter 38: The Mysterious Girl
Chapter 39: Breaking Loose!
Chapter 40: The Monster Unleashed!
Chapter 41 (S4): Flower boy!
Chapter 42: The Unthought About Team! Called Out!
Chapter 43: The Unthought About Team! Saving The Princess
Chapter 44: Capture The Mysterious Sound Ninja
Chapter 45: The Bikochū Retrieval Squad
Chapter 46: What Is There To Heal?
Chapter #47: Y/n's Determination
Chpater 48: Asuma and the Three Genin
Chapter 49: Y/n And Neji
Chapter 50 (S5): Princess Ino
Chapter 51: Sand Village raided?! Gather up the Genin 12!!
Chapter 52: The Genin 12 Split, The Sand Strikes back
Chapter 53: The Counter Strike
Chapter 54: It's Not over Yet!
Chapter 55: Goodbye! Till we meet again (Finale)
Update!!!
It's Time!
Bonus Chapter: Before Shippuden (1/5)
Bonus Chapter: Before Shippuden (2/5)
Bonus Chapter: Before Shippuden -The Battle- (3/5)
Bonus Chapter: Before Shippuden (4/5)
Before Shippuden - Book Finale

Chapter 24: Learning A New Jutsu!

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Three days passed and Y/n finally knows how to walk on water easily without focusing for long.

Old Man: I don't know how but you managed to walk on water.

Y/n: Yes I did!

Old Man: Your an impressive young Whipper snapper aren't you!

Y/n: I know I'm special.

Old Man: Yes, you are.

Y/n: Okay, so when am I gonna learn that wind thing!

Old Man: The time you go get me a fish.

Y/n: A fish?

Old Man: Not an ordinary one a big one! They are common in this area and make sure to get five.

Y/n: Five? Why five?

Old Man: Do you wanna learn the Jutsu or not?

Y/n: Yes.

Old Man: Eh eh eh! Now go!

Y/n leaves and started his search for the fish. Forty minutes passed and he found nothing.

Y/n: (How am I supposed to find this thing anyway? It's not near here or anywhere near me) Shadow clone Jutsu

Four clones appear.

Y/n: Right, let's search for this fish.

Y/nC1: I'll search by the water.

Y/nC3: I will join you!

Y/nC4: I'll help you two search!

Y/n: Well that leaves me and you.

Y/nC2: Yep!

Y/n: Let's search on top of that mountain.

Y/nC2: Yes let's!

The two disappear leaving the three to search on the water.

Y/nC1: Over here guys.

Y/nC3: Over here?

Y/nC4: Your not the boss of us!

Y/nC1: Technically I am since I was the first one to choose where to go, and like followers you two followed me.

Y/nC3: Followers?!

Y/nC4: We are nobodies followers!

Y/nC3: Yeah, let's go and leave him!

Y/nC4: Wow, wow who gives you the right to tell me what to do.

Y/nC3: I was just saying let's go!

Y/nC1: Nobodies going anywhere!

Y/nC3: I don't car-

Six huge fish jump out and eat one of the clones. The other two look at one another and run.

Y/n: Why are you guys running?

Y/nC3: We found them!

Y/nC4: Yeah let's kill it!

Y/nC2: Them?

Y/n: Y/n's charge!!!!!!

Five hours pass and Y/n returned, bruised with five large fish.

Old Man: Your alive?!

Y/n: Yeah and here's your fishes!

Old Man: Alright! Let's start training.

The Old Man ties one of the fishes on a tree.

Old Man: I want you to cut it, with your kunai.

Y/n: Easy!

Old Man: don't stab your kunai in it, just slash your kunai at it and make sure it's a straight line also it should open up.

Y/n: But I have to stab my kunai in it to cut it open.

Old Man: No, cut it open without doing that!

Y/n slashed the fish but it didn't open up only a straight red line appeared.

Y/n: What?!

Old Man: Again!

Y/n slashed the fish and it ended with same result.

Old Man: Again!

He slashed the Fish again and the same red line appeared.

Old Man: Again!

Y/n slashed the fish again and failed opening it.

Old Man: Again!

Y/n gripped the kunai tightly and slashed it at the fish, and again the same result occured.

Y/n: Why don't you do it!

Old Man: I'm just an old man ehh.

Y/n: Do I care! Do it!

Old Man: F-fine

The Old Man walked towards the tree shaking he turned to Y/n and gulped. He took out a kunai and slashed the fish, and the same red line Y/n had appeared.

Y/n: That's what I thought!

A second later the line opened up and the fish's guts fell down.

Old Man: It's really easy, now try again!

The Old Man tied a new fish and Y/n slashed it and nothing happened.

Hours later

Old Man: It's getting dark you should rest kid.

Y/n: No, I got it!

Old Man: Alright.

The Old Man went home leaving Y/n alone with the fish.

Y/n: ( How can I do this thing! How do I cut this fish without stabbing it!)

Y/n tried again multiple times and failed multiple times.

Y/n: (The Chakra walking thing was much easier not to mention simpler..... Wait simpler, maybe the easiest solution is the correct solution!)

Y/n stood up and held the kunai tightly.

Y/n: (The goal is for me to slice this thing open without stabbing it!)

Chakra began to surround the Kunai, Y/n slashes it at the fish and the same red line appeared. Following the line the fish opened up.

Y/n: I did it!

Next day of training

The next day finally came along and the Old Man was shocked to see Y/n actually cut the fish.

Old Man: You used your chakra??

Y/n: Yeah, it was simple actually I focused a bit of chakra on the kunai and did the job.

Old Man: That was clever eehh, now part 2!

The Old Man hands Y/n an inflated balloon sword with water inside.

Old Man: Focus all your chakra into this balloon and make sure to put the right amount so it's fully inflated and make sure it doesn't pop.

Y/n: Yes sir!

Y/n held the balloon sword and started focusing, the water inside the balloon began shaking and moving around. The chakra flow from Y/n's hand entered the balloon, not even ten seconds after entering the balloon popped.

Y/n: Whoops!

Old Man: No your adding to much Chakra, add a small amount.

Y/n: Right!

Y/n held another balloon sword and focused his chakra. The balloon started shaking indicating the water is moving, the chakra entered the balloon and it popped.

Old Man: This shouldn't be that hard.

Y/n: I'm trying when I add a small amount another little more comes and it pops.

Old Man: Let's reduce your chakra flow. Clones.

Y/n: Fine, my limits ten Shadow clone Justu

Ten Y/n' appeared they all nod and held their balloon swords and focused their chakra into it. The water started moving rapidly, five seconds after the chakra had entered, all the balloons had popped one by one.

Old Man: Okay, sit down boy.

All Y/n's clones implode.

Y/n: Why?

Old Man: Just do it.

Y/n shrugged and sat down crossing his legs.

Old Man: Were gonna fix the problem young whipper snapper.

Y/n: Okay.

Old Man: Close your eyes eh eh.

Y/n shut his eyes. The Old Man stood up and placed a scroll down.

Old Man: Now release your chakra.

Y/n: R-right.

Y/n took in a deep breath and a blue energy surrounded him.

The Old Man bit his own finger coursing blood to drop down. He then wrote something on the scroll with his blood.

Old Man: (I'm getting too old for this, but I have to do it) Nature Scroll captured lock!

The blue chakra surrounding Y/n slowly transformed into dark blue chakra. Y/n's eyes started to twitch and his hair rose up.

Old Man: No wonder.



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