Naruto x Male Reader (Revampe...

By Electrivire56

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Y/n is part of the Uzumaki clan that means he has red hair, that's something to know about his child hood I g... More

Prologue
Chapter 1: The Beginning Of A Tale
Chapter 2: Squad Introduction
Chapter 3: Basic Chakra Control
Chapter 4: First Mission
Chapter 5: Boulders
Chapter 7: Interferences
Chapter 8: Captured
Chapter 9: The Rescue
Chapter 10: The Captured Anbu
Chapter 11: Chunin Exams
Chapter 12: Test For Entry!
Chapter 13: The Test and Exams Commence
Chapter 14: Squad Eight and The Chunin Exams
Chapter 15: Team Eight vs Chunin level ninja
Chapter 16: Lee's determination
Chapter 17: Escaping The Forest!
Chapter 18: Battle Part
Chapter 19: Preliminary Continues!
Chapter 20: The Hyuga family conflict!
Chapter 21: The Last Two Fighters!
Chapter 22: Master Nature User!
Chapter 23: Water Chakra Control
Chapter 24: Learning A New Jutsu!
Chapter 25: The Beast Inside
Chapter 26 (S2): Hospital attack!
Chapter 27: Chunin Exams
Chapter 28: Konoha invasion Pt.1
Chapter 29: Konoha invasion Pt.2
Chapter 30: Limitations between dark and light!
Chapter 31: The Secret
Chapter 32: The Hokage's secret Jutsu!
Chapter 33: Mastered it his way!
Chapter 35 (S3): C Rank Mission Team 8
Chapter 36: Journey to the Land of Stone
Chapter 37: Land Of Stone
Chapter 38: The Mysterious Girl
Chapter 39: Breaking Loose!
Chapter 40: The Monster Unleashed!
Chapter 41 (S4): Flower boy!
Chapter 42: The Unthought About Team! Called Out!
Chapter 43: The Unthought About Team! Saving The Princess
Chapter 44: Capture The Mysterious Sound Ninja
Chapter 45: The BikochΕ« Retrieval Squad
Chapter 46: What Is There To Heal?
Chapter #47: Y/n's Determination
Chpater 48: Asuma and the Three Genin
Chapter 49: Y/n And Neji
Chapter 50 (S5): Princess Ino
Chapter 51: Sand Village raided?! Gather up the Genin 12!!
Chapter 52: The Genin 12 Split, The Sand Strikes back
Chapter 53: The Counter Strike
Chapter 54: It's Not over Yet!
Chapter 55: Goodbye! Till we meet again (Finale)
Update!!!
It's Time!
Bonus Chapter: Before Shippuden (1/5)
Bonus Chapter: Before Shippuden (2/5)
Bonus Chapter: Before Shippuden -The Battle- (3/5)
Bonus Chapter: Before Shippuden (4/5)
Before Shippuden - Book Finale

Chapter 6: There Were Two

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By Electrivire56

Villager: Three, two, one!

The villagers begin singing again.

Y/n: I hate this, I hate this.

Kurenai: Not all missions are enjoyable.

Y/n: I know but that damn kid!

Shino:... Impressive how I child is able to anger you like this...

Y/n: Child? His a brat!

Kurenai: Same goes for you three.

The three turned over to their sensei confused as she laughed.

Y/n: I'm ignoring that. Are we almost there?

Shino: .... We've been walking for a day and a couple of hours now, I'm sure we're almost there....

Y/n: Great guess.

Kurenai: You know, this could be a good way for you guys to bond together.

Hinata: Together?

Y/n: Didn't we do that?

Kurenai: Yes, but that was training it wasn't meant to make you guys friends, it was only meant to help you guys work together. This may be a mission but it's also a perfect way for all of you guys to bond.

Y/n, Shino and Hinata stare at each other.

Squad Eight: Aren't we friends already?

One of the villagers for a random reason pulled Y/n toward a river of water.

Villager: Look an ocean!

Y/n: That's a river.

Villager: They say in oceans that look like rivers there are big fish.

Y/n: That's a river, your just an idiot.

Villager: Don't believe me? Look!

Y/n: ....sure

Y/n sighed and walked over to the river. He lowered he's head down and looked at the river for a second or two and nothing happened.

Y/n: Yep! He was an idiot.

Y/n started walking toward everyone, from behind him a big fish jumped out and when he turned around the fish was gone.

Y/n: My mind is playing with me.

He quickly ran towards everyone else since he was so far back.

Kurenai: How close do you believe we are from your village?

Villager: I don't know.



















Two hours of walking passed and everyone stopped to rest. The fire was there and some were getting ready to sleep since the sun went down. The others started singing and dancing around for fun, Y/n was sitting at the fire holding his ears trying to block the sound of the singing villagers off, Hinata sat besides him lightly humming her own lyrics to negate the sound.

Shino was sitting on the other side of Y/n with his eyes closed listening to the buzz of his flies swarming around his ears blocking the sound of the villagers.

The three young members of team eight were more than annoyed when hearing the sound of the villagers. The oldest member their sensei, was staring at the forest awaiting something. Kaissue's mother quickly ran up to Kurenai with a plate of food.

Kaissue mother: Excuse me mam?

Kurenai: What is it?

Kaissue: Can you please find my son and give this to him, it's a bowl of food.

Kurenai: I'm busy right now but I can get two people who can help, Y/n! Hinata!

The two rush over to their Sensei, while Shino turned and watched them go.

Hinata: What is it Kurenai Sensei?

Kurenai: Can you two do this lady a quick favour?

Y/n: Wait your Kaissue's mother right?

Kaissue's mother: Yes.

Kurenai: Y/n-

Y/n: What do you need?

Kurenai looked at Y/n shocked.

Kaissue's mother: Can you please give my son his food, when you find him?

Y/n: Sure we can do that!

The two departure from the mother, Hinata activates her Byakugan so she could find the boy with ease.

Y/n: Do you see him?

Hinata: No, not yet.

Y/n: Where the hell did this kid even run off to-

Hinata: Found him! Wait... How old is Kaissue?

Y/n: I think he's like six or five.

Hinata: Weird, because when I look at him h- he's running!

Y/n: What why?

Hinata: I don't know?!

Y/n: Follow him!

Hinata nodded and rushed forward while Y/n followed behind. After running forward for about two minutes Hinata took a swift turn and so did Y/n.

Hinata started taking many turns in a sense following Kaissue's footsteps. The boy kept on turning as if he knew he was being followed and knew that they would have caught up with him if he had kept on going straight.

While running the two almost bumped into a tree but Hinata who was in front quickly stopped, stopping Y/n as well. The two moved around the tree and followed Kaissue again, this time he was getting faster.

For a moment Kaissue stopped and paused, coursing both Y/n and Hinata to stop. Y/n looked at Hinata confused.

Y/n: Why are we stopping?

Hinata: He stopped.

Y/n: That's a good thing right?

Hinata: Mayb- wait!

Hinata looked behind her.

Hinata: His behind us now, how?

Y/n: I'm done with this kid!

Two Y/n's appeared.

Y/n's: Lead the way Lady Hinata.

Y/n and Hinata started running straight toward Kaissue, while the two clones went their own way.

Kaissue was once again moving further away from the two, luckily the two clones Y/n had summoned had found short cuts and caught up with the boy. When they did the chakra signature of the two clones instantly disappeared.

Hinata was about to say something when Y/n pulled her by the arm stopping her in the middle of her tracks.

Y/n: Wait! Look!

Hinata turned to where Y/n was pointing which was the river bank. Kaissue was sitting there staring at the water.

Y/n stormed towards Kaissue who was still staring at the water, when Y/n got near, he noticed Kaissue wasn't staring at the water, he was staring at a picture of a man in the water.

Hinata: H-

Y/n: No.

Y/n placed down the bowl and turned back to the forest.

Hinata: But-

Y/n: He'll notice it.

Hinata: Right.

Y/n: Y-

Y/n turned his head spotting five yellow flowers.

Hinata: Y/n?

Y/n: Go ahead. I'm right behind you.

Hinata walked forward as Y/n started picking up the flowers. When Y/n was just about ready to pick out the last one, he heard a sound. The sound was familiar, it wasn't someone screaming in pain it was something more familiar. A sound Y/n heard everyday when he was younger.

The sound of someone crying. Y/n taken a back by this stood up and walked a bit further. Kaissue the young rebellion was holding the same picture of the man that was in the water. Tears fell down Kaissue's face as he held the image closer to his chest.

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