Heartbreak Hotel (Editing)

By ANTMBi

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It stands on the east side of 57th avenue. Sitting on the corner to be exact. Heartbreak hotel is. club where... More

Heartbreak Hotel (Michael & Aaliyah)
Aj's Journal
Chapter 1
Chapter 2: The Heartbreak Hotel
Aj's Journal
Chapter 3: Changes
Chapter 4: I Will Be
Chapter 5
Chapter 6: Let Me Go
Aj's Journal
Chapter 7: Innocence
Chapter 8: Faceless Enemy
Chapter 9: Remember Everything
Chapter 10: Closed Door to Open Windows.
Aj's Journal
Chapter 11: Anthem Of The Angels
Part Two: Chapter 12
Chapter 13: Smile
Aj's Journal
Chapter 14: Promise
Chapter 15 (Part 1)
Chapter 15: Life After You (Part 2)
Chapter 16: Romeo and Juliet
Chapter 17: What Leena Wants, Leena Gets
Chapter 18: A Flower For The Rain
Aj's Journal
Chapter 19: Careless Feelings
Chapter 20: Leave Them Hanging
Aj's Journal
Chapter 21: Conditions
Chapter 22: Decisions
Chapter 24: Dimps
Chapter 25: Memories
Chapter 26: Promise Ring
Aj's Journal
Chapter 27: Big Girl's Don't Cry
Aj's Journal
Chapter 28: Complications
Aj's Journal
Aj's Journal
Chapter 29: All Or Nothing
Aj's Journal
Aj's Journal
Aj's Journal
Aj's Journal
Part Three, Chapter 30: The Ghost Of You
Chapter 31: Ropes
Chapter 32: Silenced Voices
Chapter 33: Friendly Animals
Chapter 34: Lovers and Friends
Chapter 35: Tainted
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 36: Memory Dreams
Chapter 37: Genius
Chapter 38: Unanswered Questions
Chapter 39: No Heart, No Emotion
Chapter 40: Frozen
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 41: I Don't Wanna Hurt Anymore
Chapter 42: Sisterhood
Chapter 43: No Regrets
Chapter 44: Love Is...
Chapter 45: Mistress
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 46: Losing You
Chapter 47: Stunned
Chapter 48: Lust
Chapter 49: Love Never Felt So Good
Chapter 50: Deranged
Chapter 51: Hurt
Chapter 52: Seventy Times Seven
Chapter 52: Only Guy (Part 2)
Chapter 53: Aj vs. Liyah
Chapter 54: Ring of Fire
Chapter 55: Evanescing Into Nothingness
Chapter 56: Scared of Lonely
Chapter 57: It Won't Stop
Chapter 58: Black Eyes
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 59: Disappearing Thoughts
Chapter 60: Pretty Hurts
Chapter 61: Black Mailing Demon
Chapter 62:Too Little Too Late
Chapter 63: Walking Away
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 64: Death In Her Eyes
Chapter 65: Open Wounds
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 66: Suicide
Chapter 67: Blood Sucking Leeches
Chapter 68: Roots
Chapter 69: Sound Of Madness
Chapter 70: Endless Love
Chapter 71: We Belong Together
Chapter 72: Letting Go
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 73: Betrayals
Chapter 74: I Need You...You Need Me
Chapter 75: Powerless
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 76: Some Men Are Born Great...
Chapter 77: Running
Chapter 78: Sober
Chapter 79: Nobody Knows
Chapter 80: Lay It All To Rest
Chapter 81: Good Mother... Bad Mother
Chapter 82:The Award Of Merit
Chapter 82, Part 2: I Love You, Liyah!
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 83: Swimming Through Ashes
Chapter 84: Caring For The Uncaring
Chapter 85: In A Darkened Room
Chapter 86: Respect
Chapter 87:Burning Desire
Chapter 88: No Angel
Chapter 89: Threatening Chance
Chapter 90: Silence
Chapter 91: Crowd Of Chaos
Chapter 92: Tough Love
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 93: Betrayed
Chapter 94: Trouble's Ahead
Chapter 95: Fed Up
Chapter 96: Old Habits
Chapter 97: Faint Whispers
Chapter 98: Expressionless
Chapter 99: Try
Chapter 100: Road To Happiness
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 101: Take Caution When It Comes To Love
Chapter 102: The Pretender
Chapter 103: Tales of Two Black Sheep
Chapter 104: Breakdown
Chapter 105: Blood Red Roses (Final Chapter)
Heartbreak Hotel: This Place Hotel

Chapter 23: Unofficial Fiancé

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By ANTMBi

A/N: Okay, first off I want you guys to know the some of the songs that Promise will be singing are songs that are from other artists, it is not a copyright it is just for entertainment. I will always give the credit to those singers/writers and record companies when the chapter or part is over. The songs will be from singers who I vision playing De, Jojo, and Nikki. will be the same for many chapters down the road and when Aaliyah goes solo. If you have a problem just let me know. Also, my little sister broke my glasses and I can't see so if there are any spelling errors they will be corrected. I have already corrected the past couple of chapters. Other than that carry on. I'm glad you guys are enjoying the book.

Peace and Love,

Kay

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His room was pitch black, no moonlight shined in his bedroom from his windows. The TV was shut off, and the only sound that was being heard besides the sound of our heavy breathing was Etta James voice playing from the record player.

Our bodies were hot and sweaty as the rubbed against each other. I was grabbing the sheets as tightly as I could. Though I couldn't see what he was doing to me, I could definitely feel it. He was kissing my neck with so much pleasure that it made bite my lip to the point where I swear I drew some blood. He was slowly running his hands up and down my my thighs letting them circle around to my ham strings and up my butt. He was letting his kisses trail from my ear down to my sweet spot and from there he began to suck on the skin that was there. I felt the pleasure electrify through my body as a clutched the sheets again. I began running my fingers in his hair with my free hand. I could feel his erection rubbing against my mid-section. Teasing me, telling me to come for him.

He kisses got harder as he moves to my face kissing me under the right side of my chin. I closed my eyes tightly as I sucked in a mouth full of air, drying out my lips. " Come on, baby..." I whispered heavily when I was able to speak. " stop teasing me....please." I wanted him inside of me so bad that I couldn't take his kissing any longer. I was seriously about to flip him over and do him myself.

I felt his lips crush against mine as his hands found its way to my underwear and began sliding them down my thighs." Help me get these off, then." he growled. I quickly began wiggling out of them as I helped him with his also. When They were completely off he found my lips again and began moving upward on me. Then he stopped, " Hold on..." He said softly against my lips.

I let out a disapproving moan." What is it now....?" I was squirming under him, hungry for his love.

He moved his torso off of me without saying anything. I heard him pull open a drawer and then the sound of a small box opening. " We need to use protection." He said as he moved back on top of me. He began opening the condom above my head. Mindlessly I lifted my head up and began kissing his neck while I waited. I felt his arms go in between the two of us as he began putting it on. I trailed my kisses up his neck and to his lips. Then I felt his hands pulling my hips into place as went in between my legs. I became surprised when he entered me so quickly, I guess realizing how impatient I was becoming.

He was going at a steady pace, holding on to my thighs as he rocked my body over edge. My moans were soft coming out shortly after his. He buried his face in my neck as he rotated his hips. I felt as though I was on fire. My body burning up with sensation. I dug my nails into his back as he began to take me high. I felt as though I was on cloud nine; soaring through the stars. I held him closer to me making him go deeper and harder. That sparked a whole different burst of pleasure that I hadn't felt before.

My body was trembling and my legs were going numb. My mind was going crazy as he continue to work his magic. He was groaning with pleasure as he began kissing me. Our lips parted and then I found my tongue wrestling with his as our moans and groans attacked each other.

Suddenly, there was a brush of cool air that went across my back and now I was on top of him. He was putting me in control for the first time and I was more comfortable with it because it was pitch black in the room. I began moving him hips on him and instantly he began groaning. His hands were roaming up my thighs making them tingle. I felt them circle around my waist clutching me tightly. He began to sit up, pulling closer to him. He began placing kisses all over my chest. I was set on high now. We were going at a rate that was picking up a higher speed by the second. I buried my face in his neck as I tried to keep myself as quiet as I possibly could. It wasn't working, because he was doing something to me that I couldn't see but I knew I loved because I was fighting the urge to not cry out to loudly. My moans were sharp and then ending as soft sighs as I tried to muffle them.

Then he flipped me back over in the bed and he rocking me again. This time taking it a tad bit more faster than before. He knew I hated it when he went too fast or too slow and it seemed like he was taking it into consideration. I felt him tug on the back of my thighs, allowing himself to go deeper within me. Closing my eyes I clutched on on to the sheets and pulled them as hard as I possibly cold. He was grinding on me giving my leg a soft pat when he felt that it was getting too good.

As I began coming down from my high he slowed down a bit. Slowly laying on me, kissing my lips as he began to reach the end of our love making. The pleasure began to fade and I was left with my legs numb He began kissing me again. His lips were hot against mine as the kiss deepened he rolled over, bringing me to the top. I felt his hands run through my long hair and then settled at my bare back. When our lips finally parted I slowly laid my head down on his chest catching my breath as my body cooled down. " God, girl." He said softly.

"I know..." I felt his lips on my forehead. " I love you...so much."

" I love you more."

"I love you most." I said, challenging him.

He chuckled and began stroking my hair. His hand was soothing me, calming me. Slowly I began to fall asleep.

~•~•

I woke up to the sound of his humming. I was still laying on his chest covered in his thin navy blue sheets. He wasn't stroking my hair anymore. This time he was mindlessly brushing his finger tips up and down my bare arms. It was still pitch black which told me I probably hadn't slept long. I let out a soft sigh and held myself  tighter to his chest." How long have I been sleeping?" I asked, groggily.

" I don't know, maybe an hour."

"What time is it?"

"Midnight." He answered.

Suddenly the television flickered on and room was suddenly lightened enough to where I could actually see our bodies tangled up together. I had my legs wrapped around his. I was only in my underwear and that was it. A smile came across my face. I loved being like this with him. Wrapping my legs around him while he mindlessly touched me. Smelling the scent of his cologne. Feeling his soft skin against my cheek. I felt as though I was in heaven.

Making love to him was the best feeling I had ever felt in my life. It made me feel...well, loved. Every time he gave it to me it made want it even ten times more when we were finished. He knew how to keep me wanting more just by the way he looked at me. It made me wonder if I was his first or if he had someone else he made love to before me. "Michael?"

"Hmm?"

I hesitated for a moment I didn't know whether or not it was an appropriate question to ask. I took a deep breath. " Was I your first?"

" First at what?" He asked confusingly.

" You know," I looked up at him to see that his face was still creased with confusion.

I sighed. Sometimes he could be so slow. I let my hand travel down his bare chest to his boxers, giving him a hint.

"Oh!"

"Yeah," I nodded as I turned on him. "was I?" I rested my chin on my hand.

"I don't know how to answer that question." He said slowly as he moved a piece of hair face.

"Answer it straight," I said. " I won't get mad."

"I don't know...you might "

"Why would I get mad? You did have a life before I came in to it. I'm just curious."

"You're always curious."

I sucked my teeth. " Just answer it. Was I or was I not?"

"Why should it-"

I already knew what he was going to say. "Don't try to sweet talk me." I said, interrupting him. "It's just a simple yes or no."

He let out a long sigh. "No, Liyah. You were not." He almost sounded annoyed.

I felt my my eyebrows crease with disappointment. I had to admit. I did wish I was his first

"See? That's why I didn't want to tell you."

I pursed my lips. " If I wasn't your first then who was?" I asked. " Was it Tatum?"

He snickered." No."

My eyebrows frowned again. "Vanessa?"

This time he laughed out loud." No, Liyah."

I felt a little embarrassed. I remember him telling me that they never got serious. " Then who was it? You've never been in love with anyone but Tatum and Di-" I stopped when I saw the look on his face. He glanced away, blushing. He looked almost embarrassed. "Oh, don't tell me..." He gave me a sheepish smile.

I sat up in the bed. " You're kidding, right?"

"Unfortunately, no."

My mouth dropped with complete and utter disgust. I just stared down at him as if he had something growing out of his neck. I couldn't say anything.

"And that is why you shouldn't get curious."

I continued to stare at him, disgustedly. "You mean to tell me...that that " I glanced down to his boxers. " went into....that?!"

"Liyah!"

"Are you serious Michael? Oh, my God I think I'm gonna be sick." I covered my mouth as I tried to fight the urge to regurgitate.

He rolled his eyes." It only happened once. As far as I know, that night never happened to her."

"Michael, you just can't forget nights like that." I pointed out.

"You have a point, but that means nothing to me now. I promise you."

I shook my head." So you fu-"

"Liyah..."

Rolling my eyes I changed my words." So you had sex with her and you managed to keep a friendship with her? If I remember correctly I think she referred to you as a son in one of her interviews. That's disgusting." It made my skin crawl.

"Liyah, that night was a mistake, a night that I wish had never happened, and it took me a long time realize that. I told you before that she didn't love me the way that loved her."

"You say it was a mistake, but it makes me wonder if you're actually over her."

"I am," He reassured me.

I gave him a side eye." Are you sure about that?"

He sat up and wrapped his arms around me." I have you now. If she just want to be friends then fine. I don't care. I'd rather we stay that way anyway."

"So if she were to tell you," I cleared my throat to fit her annoying voice." 'Hey baby, I want to marry you.' what would you say?"

"I would tell her that I have an unofficial fiancé that I'm waiting to propose to a couple of years from now."

I started laughing while he was speaking. I turned my head. "Good answer."

"Are we done talking about this? I don't really like this conversation."

"Hey, you're the one who fucked someone who's probably all-"

"Aaliyah Dana Haughton if you don't hush up..."

I raised my eyebrow challenging him." What are you going to do?"

His serious stretched into a smile as he pressed his lips against mine." I can show you better than I can tell you."

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