AnimeStoleMyLife- Criminal -Harry Styles.
"If you are a directioner, this is the best book for you." That's what I would tell anyone about your book.
It's extremely well written, the storyline is awesome.
Typos were rare, so just a read will probably rectify that.
Para spacing- you are an expert at it, it was extremely well done.
I don't know what to say, except, I liked your book alot; and I don't like harry styles (sorry); I still liked your book.
The title of your book is great too, it doesn't give an idea about the story, yet the mystery wants you to read it.
The description for your story is also very very very well written.
You could do with an update on the cover, something showing that it's a harry styles fanfic, this might increase the views.
Ummm, yeah, that's pretty much it. I liked your book. I am sure all your readers do. Get a newer cover, and cover up the typos and you are good to be published.
Keep writing.
Lots of love
Aisha